|Reviews for Blood|
| wats00up 12/30/02 . chapter 3
oh gaud! u got to hurry up n get the next one up! i'm dying here! anyways... good story, heck... very good story. i'm hooked... HELP!
| l'Ange de Morte 12/26/02 . chapter 2
Excellent! I love the ideas that you had fo this fic, are you really planning for Harry to be sent to his own time by a witch or wizard, or is he just going to live until he reaches his own time again?
| Rosadina 12/24/02 . chapter 1
| DruidessQueen 12/23/02 . chapter 2
What to say, what to say? I want to make this good since there is nothing more annoying than writing a review only to find ten minutes later that you have more to say and having to wait for the next chapter to come out.
I think I'll start out by saying great originality on your part. Taking Harry back in time, turning him into a vampire and having him face all those challenges is a great plotline with plenty of twists and turns. Then creating your very own vampire society complete with language, speech, monarchy, parental relationships, and upbringing now that was purely ingenious. All you need is a religion and you have it set. I'm not sure many including I could have done any better, or as well, or at all for that matter. The characters worked out fine too, giving each a personality that fits.
Now for the writing... you are very detail-oriented which in some cases can be a bad thing but in this one it is definately not. The exact opposite in fact. You really think things through and from the lack of error made I can tell you put a lot of time into correcting and modefying too which in my opinion is just as important (and no I am not some English teacher thank you very much it is jus a little pet peeve I keep).
Now for some criticisms which I beg you not to take offense too. I can find something wrong in nearly every story I read.
First I think I will mention is the pace. You are doing a great job with the years and I know and respect that you only have so much room and have done so much already, I just find a few scenes to be a bit lacking, not by much though!
For instance with the death of Harry's sire Quinten... I understand your need to kill him off (even if I do entirely aprove, he was such a great character and you could have done much with him... too bad) but you barely allowed time to properly grieve his death. Yes a small problem in comparison with the whole werewolf attack, but still he was a great loss and deserves some recognition right?
Also I do wish you'd elaborate a bit more on the history and ways of the vampires. Like why are they on such warring terms with the werewolves when they're practically the same in quite a few aspects? And the way the time differences are...Some people may not find this as interesting but I sure do!
I really love the way you are entering certain philosophies into the tale as well. Mny of your sayings are very true and agreeable. Great life lessons!
Maybe I should be a bit more patient right? This is only the second chapter but it's such a great story I'm already getting caught up in the fantasies and daydreaming of different ways for this to end up.
Lastly I need to thank you for writing this and I sincerely hope you continue. Sorry for boring you so long. I'll go away now and let you do your work. By the way this definately ended up on my favorites list. Keep up the good work and Good Luck!
| Krystal 12/23/02 . chapter 2
Love this story, its one of the best Harry as a vampire stroys out there and I am so happy you updated. Please continue to work on the story and update soon.
| sevter 12/22/02 . chapter 2
WHAT THE BLOODY HELL... I hate cliffhangers!
| FatalonieThe Grinning God 12/22/02 . chapter 2
_ I love this! hehe. Harry will go back to the future right? I mean... yeah... afterall it says HP/SS! hehe I'm pathetic, no? Merry Christmas _
| Eaiva le Fay 12/22/02 . chapter 2
*grin* I really love Harry in this story... I can't really explain why, I just do. :D
A thrilling, 'page-turning' chapter! Update soon!
| Charcoal feather 12/21/02 . chapter 2
cool chap! I can't wait to read the next one. I like Harry's weapon. I was wondering if everyone knew harry was a trained wizard before the battle
| Creamy Mimi 12/21/02 . chapter 2
Oh wow. Totally cool and well written. Till the next for sure.
| KittiFlora 12/21/02 . chapter 2
Another amazing chapter chapter and well worth the wait! Will the next chapter explain why the world Harry's in is so different from the world he came from?
| Guest 12/21/02 . chapter 2
Really, really, really good story. Just one request- update faster, PLEASE! Anyway, I like your writing style. That's all, bye!
| blackunicorn 12/21/02 . chapter 2
i just love this story please hurry up with the next chaptrer please. this chapter was so sad. you r so good with words.
| Death 12/21/02 . chapter 2
Rather to my astonishment I love this fic. Please update soon!
| Jewelclaw Lady of Wind 12/21/02 . chapter 2
Wicked chapter. Can't wait until you post the next chapter.