love it!! but don't you think syd woulda fought back??
love dixon's line!! loL!!
keep ti up :)

just as their lives sems normal, the ** hits the fan. i love the turn!! the secretary is hilarious!!
keep ti up :)

yay!! shippernes!
keep it up :)

yay! love it, but i dunno if syd would be that callous towards her mother's belongings...
keep ti up :)

very emotional! love the father/daughter bond moment!
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love this chapter- keep ti up :)

i don't know if she would say "no freaking way"... but the rest is wonderfuL! keep it up :)

love it!! jack knowing all is great- lol! keep it up :)

I can't wait for the next segment! Your attempt at action, as you put it was actually really good. I really enjoyed it.

Three cheers for Secret Agent Girl! Hip-hip-hooray! Hip-hip-Hooray! Hip-Hip-HOORAY! This story RMFO! Can't WAIT to read your next installment! Hurry hurry hurry!

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Absolutely amazing! you have a real gift for crafting and manipulating words. I sound like a retarded English teacher. Anyway, ver good job, on both of your stories, and I can't wait to read the next chapter

Excellent end to this story. I can't wait to read the next installment.

I really enjoyed this story. I am so excited and can barely wait for the
next chapter. So have it here soon!

I guess so much for normal.

That was very good!! I thought it was ending and then wham a cliff hanger.very good work!!

Ooh, good. You have to update soon.

Ooh, good. You have to update soon.