its a little weird and a little hard to follow but its ok

i just going to suggest that next time you have any character have to master a lot of skills in a short period of tie to have time-travel involved. it makes no sense and is impossible for harry to have learned all of the skills he now has in 3 months. it might have been better to have time pass differently in the "elven realm" then in the human one. that would give hi time to master his skills and form a closer relationship with his family.

cool. i find that the storys where harry becomes a _ (insert a magical creature here) are really good and i hope that this one will be worthwhile. (i am sure it will be) anyway thanks for writing so i can read it.

-1withthepotionsseveroussnape

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

I love your story! It is unique and well written. It is easy to get immersed in the story and it has a clearly defined ending. Well done!

Hi good story i was wondering if you could make a sequel

Very good chapter. Good story, enjoyed it.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny

I like it.. Well done.. :)

o my god. thatwas amazing. i loved it! great plotline.

Wow I didn't know meilani's daughter's name was popular enough to rate being in a story. In case you didn't guess its leilani

This is an intriguing storyline but rather simplistic in terms of character development and certain plot points. Also it dearly needs a good beta read for spelling errors.

When the elves first arrive, having Elle enter as she did is cute but really too silly. This is a war party with two royal family members, if they want to be taken seriously there should have been a much more formal arrival & introductions beyond the Prince, Princess & Evan. If the elves at Hogwarts have all these secrets then why would they have arguments in the middle of the Great Hall at mealtimes? Surely Emrys had a magical way of silencing Trelawny (sp?) instead of jumping on her which immediately tells the students that something is up. Also, the student Eric just appears out of nowhere, if he is to become a source of information then he should have been introduced amongst the students sooner.

I'll reiterate the complaint that all of the 'E' names is distracting and confusing.

All of the elves having names that start with 'E' is a little silly, not to mention confusing when you add in the place names that start with 'E'. A tradition such as that in the royal family makes sense but not every elf born.

Also, you had Harry leave with the elf so quickly you never told us anything beyond that he sent notes off. How did Harry send notes off? Did he take his trunk & belongings? What about Hedwig?