hey great story i loved it. I hope to see a new one soon and really soon. Want to read and review a new one then look for stories by me. They are good and ful of action. keep up the good work.

dude
dat wAs a cool story.
topaz wAs right. Dis story is cool. I agree wit topaz i would really really like it if youd do a notherz story like dis one. k?
If you want to tell me someding dan email topaz k. Im sleeping over topazs house to day. i am so happy!
later dude. ~__^

I can not seperate the chapters. It wont let me. -.- I aam also trying to do my best for the story but I can not think of any details. It will be improved and revised later. All I need is a little help.

OHHHH!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
write another one!!!
THAT WAS SO TOUGHING, LOVING, ACTION,MYSTERIOUS
AND AND OOHHHH THAT WAS SO GREAT!!!!
sorry I got carried away.... Wow! I now declare something....more like a favor.....EVERY STORY YOU RIGHT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET ME KNOW!!!!! (Sorry got carried away again....Ohhh I have to tell my friends,

Minnie
Nina
Sapphire(My sister
Meghan (It's spelled right)
courtny
Samantha
Me!
lousie



I know that they willl like it.

Topaz
Rosales