Nice story except some problems but as i read ur other reveiws i realize u know what they are.
Funny at the end when ranma's curse comes up and akane's list good story update soon.

Thank Goodness you updated. Good Chapter

Nice story. but ranma never killed anyone really. and plus you spelled it wrong

not bad but u could tell you never read the series. I mean out of all the girls ranma was with why did u pick Akane???

It was excellent loved it. If only other stories could be like this. tHE FEELING of rage between ranma and akane was excellent. Although you misspelled Ranma many times by spelling it ramna. you might want to change that but anyway can't wait for the fourth chapter hurry up and update.

good stori... If they are still in Nerima though, in the stori, they ARE in Tokyo. And its Ranma than Ramna.. Just giving u some corrections.. HPE YOU UPDATE SOON! =)

What the hell does this story have to do with Ranma?

Interesting premise. You have one little eror that is bothering me however. You misspelled Ranma's name throughout the whole thing. "n" comes before the "m" not the other way around like you have written it.

Hmmm... pretty cool Ranma story... but why do you have it in original? It doesn't go here... Anyway, the story is pretty cool though. ^.^ I love Ranma.