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Reviews for: Goodbye Ramna
Kahal 12/7/02 . chapter 4
Nice story except some problems but as i read ur other reveiws i realize u know what they are.

Funny at the end when ranma's curse comes up and akane's list good story update soon.
Shaggy Jack 12/6/02 . chapter 4
Thank Goodness you updated. Good Chapter
Neeko Chan 12/6/02 . chapter 3
Nice story. but ranma never killed anyone really. and plus you spelled it wrong
ukasun 12/6/02 . chapter 2
not bad but u could tell you never read the series. I mean out of all the girls ranma was with why did u pick Akane?
Shaggy Jack 12/6/02 . chapter 1
It was excellent loved it. If only other stories could be like this. tHE FEELING of rage between ranma and akane was excellent. Although you misspelled Ranma many times by spelling it ramna. you might want to change that but anyway can't wait for the fourth chapter hurry up and update.
therealmelon 12/3/02 . chapter 2
good stori... If they are still in Nerima though, in the stori, they ARE in Tokyo. And its Ranma than Ramna.. Just giving u some corrections.. HPE YOU UPDATE SOON! )
taku1 12/3/02 . chapter 2
What the hell does this story have to do with Ranma?
Minakane 12/2/02 . chapter 1
Interesting premise. You have one little eror that is bothering me however. You misspelled Ranma's name throughout the whole thing. "n" comes before the "m" not the other way around like you have written it.
Bonnie Parker 11/25/02 . chapter 1
Hmmm... pretty cool Ranma story... but why do you have it in original? It doesn't go here... Anyway, the story is pretty cool though. . I love Ranma.
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