   DesertVixen 2008-02-25 . chapter 1I just found this, and it's great! Coincidentally, I just bought the 2002 MOTU stuff, so it's very fresh in my brain.
I think you did an excellent job.
DV |
| jghetrick 2007-10-19 . chapter 1 ok next story. come one tell more. please |
| Knites 2006-12-01 . chapter 1 Wow, this belongs in a larger story. Well done. This is exactly how Teela discovering the secret should go down. Thanks for the great read. |
| HitokiriKurisuta 2006-02-27 . chapter 1 AWESOME! ^_^ Whadda ya mean "out of character"? That was spot-on!
Nice work on this.
I read the LJ thing on your profile...Hope you have more spare time at some point, and your life gets less hectic. You seem like a really good writer, and I'd love to read more He-Man stuff. ^_~ |
| Anon 2005-05-09 . chapter 1 Write a sequel! |
| Jonathan Priest 2005-03-25 . chapter 1 Great work, this is going on my favorites |
| Ulka 2004-02-28 . chapter 1 Wow!! This is really one gem of a story. The best "Teela discovers Adam as He-Man" story I've ever read. Too bad its a one shot though.
But perhaps, you could write an Adam version of this. It'll definately be fun to read ;)
Good story. I'm so gonna go sift thru the others now! |
| Joy Crawford 2003-11-27 . chapter 1 That was a great story.
Write on!. |
| T. 2003-06-19 . chapter 1 Love it. |
| kally 2003-01-18 . chapter 1 i thought your fic was prity cool good job :) |
| Melissa 2003-01-18 . chapter 1 Wonderful. That's really all I have to say. I haven't seen a "revelation" he-man fanfic written this well yet. I hope to see more;) |
| Luna12 2003-01-09 . chapter 1 EXCELLENT!!! Very true to character. Thank you for not making Teela wimpy. Great job! I hope to see more stories by you! |
 Classic Cowboy 2002-12-20 . chapter 1great fic, and if the blame goes to me for such a awesome fic I'm honored, and you won't have to speculate long on Sacrifice I got college and crap over with now till after Christmas so I'm finally able to catch back up on my fics.
anyway great job, and this baby's goin on my favs |
| Jax9 2002-12-05 . chapter 1 Keep Writing! |
 Kristen Sharpe 2002-11-29 . chapter 1This is a really nice look into what might happen if that 'little' secret came out. And, almost surprisingly so since any vision of it I could think of (and would have told you I'd prefer before reading this) would involve it coming out during a battle and involving the villains nearly finding out as well. But, even with the action limited and everything boiled down to the character drama, I wasn't a bit disappointed. ::chuckles:: I even think I like the new series a lot more just because of your fanfics. Gives me a whole new take on the characters. |
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