That was so good! I think you should write more chapters. Update soon

That was really good! I really want you to write another chapter cause there all so great! plz post again soon

lol funny!

that was great. if you want to, id totally advise doing more. i loved it. one thing i do want to know is how bulma explained how vegeta got turned into a buritto, but that doesn't really matter. it was great. please do more.

yes! write one with goten gets even with trunks!!
OMG those stories are so funny please write more i enjoyed reading them! I love vegeta and trunks bondings and angsty fic and I love the why trunks plays tricks on vegeta great job!

Goten should SO get even with Trunks!! hahh Vegeta Burrito! hahaaha i love these stories write more or else *polishes sharp object of destruction* um yea...

your story is great

Yes. Make more! Heheeheheehehe. this is beautiful!!

THIS IS SOOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!! PLEASE update SOON:D!! It's very cute fic too!!!!!!!!!!

oh dear, that was just terrible! *chuckle* yeah, you should keep up with these cute oneshots - but don't kill yourself coming upw ith ideas... just when you come up with one let us see it *grin* *chuckle*

BURRITO!!! BOL!!!!! thats too funny

Heh! Trunks, you're a boy after my own heart....

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!

continue!!!! write more... you know you want to.


ja ne
~starr~

ROTFL!!!!

that was realy good. poor veggie though... being turned into food... oh well


ja ne
~starr~

Hehe, these r funny. The burrito 1 had me cracking up! Can't u just imagine Vegeta as a burito?? LOL. Anywayz, I don't know about u makin a Goten one. I mean u can if ya wanna, but I am really more of a Trunks fan, LOL.

~Emrys~