 Phoebo 5/7/12 . chapter 8 Amazing, i loved your story! i loved the first chapter when joey kept trying to convince chandler to kiss him. your a great writer and im glad i read your story :) |
 Maron Kanzaki 3/2/11 . chapter 8Out of *all* of your stories, this is my favorite! |
 Satan'z Myth 4/1/07 . chapter 8First chapter was truly... wa-ay too COOL ! But... about the last chapter - had to end, somehow, right ? Lol... very good... EXCELLENT!... indeed! |
 grim ripper596 12/1/05 . chapter 8aw |
 Beloved 1/18/05 . chapter 8dude!
great!
happy ending! |
 footiefan 10/7/04 . chapter 8The whole way through I really enjoyed this. It was so intense.Could you please update an alternate ending for chapter 8. |
 Lucy H 3/26/04 . chapter 8Oh... this is good! |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 8*grin* You made Phoebe a lesbian with Bonnie. That just seems so perfect somehow.
And why is it that Richard is not right for Monica? How are they different?
A nice ending which wraps everything up very nicely. Wonderful job. Dwee! |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 6*blinks* Didn't Joey leave Chandler's room after they were done? but then when Roos came over, Joey came out of it? Maybe I have been reading to many of your stories and am getting them mixed up. *is worried*
And poor Joey. Chandler is just so moody and full of denial. How can he stand it? |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 5accused of Chandler liking Eddie's - switch Chandler and of around
crazy as kissing him and sleeping with him!* - it'll sound better to take out the first him
Good chapter. *smiles and goes to read next part* |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 4"Then what's the matter, Joey?" - I don’t think that needs a comma there.
So, Chandler is a real person then? Must mean tht he is begining to see just how much Chandler means to him.
Hope that you can read thjis. For some reason, I can't read what I am typing. |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 3yep, desperite times call for desperite messures. but now that they know they like it, they need to to sleep together! not in different rooms. *pokes Chandler* Still in denial there, bud? |
 Nevyn 12/23/03 . chapter 1believe you had your sister Cookie punch me." - should there be a comma before Cookie? *frowns and can't remember all the grammar rules.*
Joey smiled, and pat his shoulder. - patted
you oughta be drunk enough to kiss me too!" - oughta really doesn't fit the feeling of the sentence in this context. but I can't think of how to spell the alternate word at the moment.
did he really have to kiss a guy for an audition? did he get the part?
I like this so far. Very ammusing. |
 Anikathepen 9/18/03 . chapter 4Great fic |
 Exintaris 1/13/03 . chapter 8 I failed to keep up with this, have only just done so. Quite nicely handled, although I wonder if it wouldn't have freaked out the others just a little more. I mean, no one thought *Joey* was gay. But I like the "happily ever after"s, especially Phoebe and Bonnie - not a bad idea! |