This may be several years old, but it's still a damn good story. Bizzare and entertaining. Thanks for sharing this.

Very nice story, very nice. A happy, though, rather unconventional ending for most Ranma fanfictions. Who would'a guessed that Akane would be so accepting of more... sapphic ideas.
A+ story, thanks.

To be perfectly frank, I didn’t like it, the plot didn’t seem to flow correctly, you didn’t introduce new scenes adequately or make a clear notation for change in thought, character or location. I think their were a few word omissions, and the logic behind the curse lock was spotty at best. Now, I have to admit that it is a difficult plot to pull off; I doubt I could have done any better, and I will concede that it is well thought out and very original (as far as an onna-ranma piece can go anyway). From the viewpoint of a reader, I would recommend this piece to others, it has all of the trademarks of a good piece, I just didn’t like the way it was assembled. Ciao

For its lenght this is one of the coolest Ranma-chan/Ranko fanfiction I've ever read.

I wished it didn't end here but then again, I hate ending...

I enjoyed this story; it had a rather unique flavor to it. (which is fairly rare trait amongst fanfiction, at least in my experiance) I think it's goin' on my 'favorites' list.

Nice story. Thanks for sharing.

Best,
~JohnnyG

Great Story!

While I generally like the story and plot that you have placed ranma in, and the interplay with his relationship with akane is believable given their personalities, I think that your overall writing style could use a bit more detail.

As an example of what I mean, there are several places in this chapter alone that I felt that I had missed some detail of the story, but after re-reading the passage, could not found the lines that I had accidently skipped. this is well illustrated by the section concerning the fight between shampoo, ranma, and the other-vilage-amazons. this is also illustrated in the fact that they won, but how exactly? and how did they get out of the village? where did they go when they left the village? where did they find genma-panda when they rode him back all of a sudden to the cage?

I have had this feeling as I've read this story that I've been looking at half-scenes and missing scenes that are an important part of the story. I think that you have a pretty good writing style, but you just need more details to fill in the gaps.

Good luck!

Torrey Jones

Awsome story. Loved it. Very unique, and i was very surprised when i first started reading it. You must write a sequel or something like that. This story it to great to end just like that!
Good story.

Hehehe... Good work, finally finishing this. Loved the gags and jokes, and everyone wasn't *overly* ooc, just moderately. *snicker*

Do I mean 'bonbori' where I have 'bori-bori'?

Thanks, everyone. ^^

For some reason, every time I've reviewed the previous chapters of this fic, it's never showed up. Ah, well, I've been reading it and I've been loving it since you started. This is the most unique concept I've ever seen for Ranma stuck as a girl. And you're truly evil for leaving off on a cliffhanger. *pouts*
As a suggestion, mentioning physics in the summary might intimidate some readers into passing over this story, and I think that would be such a shame.
Keep up the good work and please update soon.

Interesting concept... I loved the "Ryoga VS Ranma with everyone walking in on them" scene, lol...
Shampoo acting like that is a bit OOC... she knows Ranma'd get suspicious if Akane just HAPPENED to get hurt that way... Ukyo would never do something like that.
Unless Shampoo didn't think that far.

Otherwise, wonderful fic! You're evil for leaving a cliffie like that, y'know... pure evil.

Bah! Ryoga is a bastard! >=(

Ranma should attack him with full blown feminine rage!

Just because there are few reviews doesn't mean that people aren't reading the story. It's just hard to think of something worthwhile to say besides the typical 'Yeah, this story's interesting.'

There are minor spelling and grammar points, but nothing that detracts greatly from the story. It's annoying how often I have to remind people about the basics of writing on FF.net, but oh well. Anyway, I suggest running the completed draft through a grammar check to catch the stuff that went uncaught. For example:

It didn't mater much – even if she had, Shampoo nor Ucchan were ready to put up much of a response.

"Mater" is an obvious misspelling, and the sentence is missing a "neither":

It didn't matter much – even if she had, neither Shampoo nor Ucchan were ready to put up much of a response.

The characterizations seem to be off by a few degrees, though. It seems that way to me, anyway. Akane seems more mischievous than I expect, and she doesn't really talk the way I think she would. Shampoo and Ukyo kind of seem more grabby and possessive than normal, too. And Ukyo is probably too conscious of her 'cute fiancee' act around Ranma to forget herself enough to tell someone to 'Shut the hell up!' Finally, Ryoga seems particularly mean, though I suppose you could argue that someone who disguises himself as a pet in order to get into a girl's bed isn't much of a nice person in the first place.

By the way, you don't need to keep referring to Ranma as 'Saotome.' The first few times, I thought you were referring to Genma. I guess you're trying to mix up your names and pronouns so you're not always saying 'Ranma' in every sentence, but it sounds kind of odd when I'm reading. From the way you write, it almost seems like it's Akane who thinks of Ranma in her head as 'Saotome.' Like I said, it sounds kind of odd.

My comments may focus on the negative, but I'd just like to remind you that I did like this story. I don't think anyone's ever written of such a unique way of locking Ranma's curse. But anyway, keep up the writing, and good luck with whatever it is you do when you're not writing.