Very entertaining - great suspense, interesting twists, wonderful angst. :D

*whew* yes, yes, I did think it was Shay :P When I wasn't thinking it was Frankie. lol Thanks for not making it Shay. Great story...on to the rest of it ;)

Wow, the Lincoln room! those are some pretty lucky kids lolol Great story, you two. Crammed full of all the suspense and angst y'all are so very good at. :D

Surprise! WoW!

Great story!

Rather of rude of you to set up that lovely picture of the happy family right after telling us Frank's about to die ;P Intriguing start, as always. :)

I'm glad everything worked out in the end. But, you just love those cliffhangers don't you. How long is "in time?" LOL. But, I can't wait for the next story. What kind of trouble are you going to get Jake into now?

This is such a great story with a good twist. Can't wait for more with these characters. great job.

Brava. Lovely ending. I feel sorry for her the loss of her mother but she wasnt really mom anymore was she?

Very nice ending. Well done, well done!

That was so intense! I thought Frank was a goner. But, I know you could never kill that man. :) Frank is going to kick some ass when he finds out who ordered this hit on him. If I was that person, I would run and run fast! LOL. Please post more soon!

WOW! That was awesome! Poor Frank, afraid Ariana was going to kill his wife, and poor Shay finding out her mother was the hitter...and was ALIVE, all those years...MORE! ;)

WHOA! Shay's mother! *GASP*

This is such a great story and suspensful. I never would of quessed Shay's mom. great job.

This is such a great story and suspensful. I never would of quessed Shay's mom. great job.

I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! It's Shay's mom! OMG! That's what frightened Thomas so badly. Please post more ASAP!