Since when did her name change to Serenity?! I thought it was Serena!

hey you should do a sequel to this story i think it would be really good.

Please update soon!! I want to find out what happens next. PLEASE ;>

please go on.

OMG! What happened to Sere? You BETTER write a sequel! If you know what's good for you! MuahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHWuahahahahahahahahah!

hi, i'm here to tell you i really like the plot of your story, but i really think you should concider spacing out the conversations. it gts very confusing for me to read the story when a huge conversation get all condensed into one long paragraph. besides, if you space out the conversation, it'd make the story seems longer too :D. and when there's a scene change, you might want to enter some sort of seperator in it, because that gets confusing too. also, can you add some more depth into the characters? the story's kinda just descibing the characters as they come and not as how they are, and you should include more of their feelings into when they're having conversations with each other so the readers know what they're really thinking and stuff. ok. but i luv ure plot. lol. cya

oh everything was so beautiful...please do a sequel...please please please! i want to know...what happened so bad!

wtf?? what was that about? what kind of stupid ** ending is that? seriously if ur gonna write ** like that, dont evenbother writting a fanfic.please, do us all a favor

Please write a sequal. I loved your story it is so great. You are a great author hope to read many more stories from you.

Fantastic, love it please update ASAP!

OH MY ** **! THIS WAS SO FREAGIN AWESOME! dAMN, I LOVED IT TO PEICES.

awesome!

um...is the story like finished if not zPLEASE UPDATE SOON ! !! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

oh my god... why havent you updated in for ever? i just read the story today for the very fisrt time... i love it its really good.
hnn... what else can i tell you... well... you gave me an entire different view of such situations. I would never say yes to man who asked me out if he already had i kid. I mean, i'd be like... well, why the hell will i raise some ** kid??!?!?!
but that all change... at least partly... because of this fic. see? aint it good to read?
i hope that you'll update... i hope its that you just dont have time and not that your lazy! we dislike writters who dont finish fic remember? well, i hope you find the time... its like only one more chappie isnt it?
thank you so much for writting this and try to answer me what i asked... oh wait... i dont think i asked you anything...
update!
-fiore

o please update fast and make it a happy ending please,i dont like any sad ending... anyways i love it