Waaaa! Hope you had a better ending than that . I was expecting a kinda sweet romantic ending for Tohru ad Yuki even this is a short one :) nevertheless it's all good and refreshing story isn't it :)

Update soon...

You get points for being completely IC. I can just imagine Ayame and Shigure setting up something like this. Nice ending too

That was really good! I loved it! Um, I dont want to keep making sentances that sounds like, really lame. So yeah. AMAZING! See ya.

you did a good job it seemed kinda more like a Ayame and Yuki story though XD and you can watch Fruits Basket online _

BRILANT! BRAVO! I LOVE IT!

haha..i wanna see the ending with their marriage haha! nevertheless, great story!

cute cute cute _

Um In the Manga Yuki's mother was really kinda mean-ish. Since she couldn't get Ayame to bend to her will, she turned to just throughly controlling Yuki's life, making Yuki mentally unstable, Oh wait I'm sorry...thats kinda of depressing isn't it -_-' I'm sorry if I put down your hopes on what Yuki's mom was. Anywhoo I loved it! The part where Ayame gave that little speech to Yuki was to cute \

:)

If your guessing on the FB personalities then how do you know what your doing, if you've never seen the show? Or have you read the manga?

That was pretty good character wise, I think Ayame was a bit off but the ending had that same innocent adorability that you get often in the show. Very pleasant normal FB story.

Aw! That's so cute!

Aw that was a very cute story. Yay!

aww.. sweet and beautifull... you wrote ayame so well!

Poor Yuki