Great Story!

Very unique story. Loved it!

OOH, very good. So Buffy is actually Anne. Or she is the android! That could cause some problems, would explain how she healed so fast though.Very good story, am going to read the next one now!

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Faith has scary dreams.I am now stuck with a Disco dancing Giles in my head.Spike? Sucking at Faith;s wound. There's another lovely picture.

Very cryptic dream. What does it mean?

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yay! Angel's here!

Why does everyone think he is evil as soon as he comes to Sunnydale? More great characterisation here, Angel, Giles and Willow.

Gulp! Am worried now about Buffy, not that I wasn't before but... oh god!

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Yikes! Kind of bloody that chapter was. Sorry for the odd phrasing there.

A very good Buffy though, you have her feelings down perfectly.

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dude, that was sweet. easily one of the most original fanfic concepts i've ever encountered. also well-written, and i liked the stylistic twist of alternating first-person POVs.

i'm going to read the sequel right now.

Getting more and more interesting.

So a Slayer died, eh? Adam One walked away, and Buffy have a computer in her head. I'm really starting to believe that Buffy got herself a brand new body.

Anyway, good work, please update soon.

I am still a bit confused but I still like how thing are going and I can not wait to see the next chapter

I really enjoy this story.

I find myself apprehensive about Buffy being ok. Which is what I was looking for, thank you.

It's kind of strange being comfortable in Faith's head-of course here she is fully reformed. It's whetting my apetite for however they handle it on the show.

And who/what is Buffy talking to?

great so far,

Good setup between Giles and Angel re something being off with Buffy-the voices and unreasonable healing. And good foreshadowing of future troubles/resolution between Buffy and Faith.

Looking forward to more.

"Slayer, comma, the" That was one funny line.

Riley did is duty. Followed his orders. And that's never a good enough excuse for doing something wrong. *Hello, Homeland Security Gestapo. Buy guns, bury them in the walls, the parks, etc. Don't forget radios that are freq hopping, SSB, etc.* In the show I was never prouder of Riley than when he punched the officer saying, "I am an anarchist!" Governemnts have killed about 200million people last century, how bad can anarchy be?

Oh yeah, I'm reviewing. Rant off.

The betrayal. If you ask me, they took her down too easily. And yes Riley, you're sorry-just not the way you think.

Loving the fic.

Another good story by you! Keep up the good work! :)

Nice story, interesting. Did Buffy transfer into Adam One?

Oh, and kill Riley. In a very painful manner, please.