this deserevs a sequel!MAKE 1!

I...I must confess...here and now...

I love you.

You are a god in my books...THANK YOU SO MUCH!

yes i love the story so far as you can see i'm only on chapter 4 but i think i've read this before anyway i love sanzo and goku and koznen together so i'll read and reread these stories often as i please and yes i would love a picture of goku and koznen kissing or whatever other pictures you have on these 2 if you have them you can email me at thank you in advance and keep up the great writing on my 2 favorite saiyuki men s*g 4ever

Well...that was just special...
It would be SO MUCH BETTER if you didn't have so much linebrakes or random Japanese insertations though.

That was one of the few GOOD Konzen/Sanzo x Goku fics that I've read. I really enjoyed it. It was kinda sad, and I even cried, but I guess in a way that's a compliment, because it touched my heart and soul... Ch, I sound like a cheesy romance novilist... but I mean it. well, anyway, this is great, and that picture you mentioned.. if you by any chance have it, could you e-mail it to me? My e-mail is thanks. ^__^ Still an awesome fic.

Yours truely; absesive crazy yaoi Konzen/sanzo x Goku loving chick ^^

*wales* GOD that was so sad! *cries* But I love it so much! I'm torn! I don't know if I should feel bad about loving this story so much! Homura is such a bastard! A hot, hot, godly bastard! Konzen? Why don't you love me?! Homura! Why won't you kidnap me?! Lol...I'm weird. I love this story so much! You keep writing!

Oh wow. I've never seen anything so bad in my entire life.

possibly the most heinous thing I've ever seen posted. I only wish Smartania had the stomach to hack the rest of these chapters so at least SOMETHING good (my entertainment) would come out of this.

By all means, remove this and apologize to the fanfiction world.

well done. u great

This _storyline_ was very good and it could have been done beautifully...unfortunately, it wasn't.

It was understandable that your grasp of the English language was less than perfect, but you should have gotten a fluent beta reader.

While _some_ of the romance scenes were quite good, most of them were cheesy, cliched, and not entirely believable. Romance doesn't have to be complete drivel.

The plot was well thought out and some of the dialog and imagery were wonderful; basically, this story had a lot of promise that you unfortunately lacked the skill to fully actualize. I hope someday when your writing skill has matured more you'll come back and rewrite this so that it can reach its full potential.

This is bloody brilliant! ^__^

Don't listen to them, Gokugurl, I think you're work is great. Hell, you made Goku really cute and innocent. Oh, and please continue on the sequal, Of Violet Twilight. I'm dieing to know what happends next.

Warrior Nun

Okay, let’s just go off the top of things shall we?
-Insertion of Japanese
Nobody! I mean nobody! Talks like that! Have you ever seen an actual anime?! In either version (dubbed/original) you do not ever hear them go “Nani are you doing?" or a Japanese sentence with an English word thrown in here, or there, or anywhere! So stick to one language that you know which it is obviously not Japanese nor do you seem to have a firm grasp of English either. You need to go back to 2nd grade and actually pay attention this time, okay sweetheart.
-Emotes
Who in their right mind inserts emotes into a written story? They are not an emotion, you idiot. They are for Instant Messenger and the like. Not to be put in a story because you’re too lazy to actually write out the emotion!
-*Bows*
...there are really no words that can express you naivety and stupidity. Just stop. Now.

Oh and by the by replying to a review, one that you asked for mind you, just because you did not enjoy that someone has exposed your horrifying work not only makes you pathetic but also a jackass. Have a nice day!

it was so sad i cried, i couldn't help it. i can't wait for the next one. make sure that it will be as good as this one i want to be cring at the end. kk ^^

i'm with you screw school. togeather we shall burn all schools down. but jokeing aside. good ch. i hope goku kills that **.