Oooohhh absolutly love it....

What about Alice?

Your grammer and spelling are horrible, you keep forgeting the " and "'s and it is 'you're' not your, in some places. And they could just airlift Will to another hospitle. Other than that you're doing really good. I really enjoy reading your storys.

Aaw, she's not gonna have a baby??? Poo!!! Great so far, I can't wait to read the sequel!!!

Nice job!! A very good fic. I had a plesant time reading It.
~Nichole~

Oh, Most DEFINATLEY!! (did I spell that right?oh well)
And, since it would be a big surprise anyways, and seeing how I'M a twin myself, it would be just fitting to have, ya' know, two *cough* bundle of joys *cough*!!!
I even can offer names and such! I love doing that! And details of twin type pregnancies and births and such! Just give me a holler if you are interested!
Love the idea!
Update soon!
thanx!

No hun, YOU ROCK!!! I loved this! Definatly one of my favorites. I cannot wait for the sequel! Please hurry, I'm dying!!!

I definatly think that they should have a kid just not right now cause of everything and during the first trimester the stress and everything could be damaging...

But seriously, you need to write a sequel or another fic or something cause you are awesome.

- Piper

Another great chapter :) Keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter soon :)

I don't know what you should do about the little bundle. *But*...I do know that this is a great story and I can't wait to read more. You did a great job with Jack/Vaughn and their...dislike, shall we say.

- Piper

I think you are doing a great job with this story. And I'm glad that Will pulled through, because we couldn't go and have him dying on Syd. Don't get me Wrong I believe with all my heart that Syd belongs with Vaughn, But I like Will too. And about Syd's little buddle of joy thing causing her to well share her insides with the tidy-bowl man, It would be a little too soon for her to know and right now it I'm not sure that it fits with the story. Maybe a little later like back when they get to L.A. and get everything sorted out then maybe, but the timing is a little off.
Well Keep up the good work!!
~Nichole~

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!

Though I just tuned in, don't think I've been avoiding your fic.

It's an interesting story with many plot twists and turns. The begining reminds me a lot of a story I wrote "Inner Demons"... with that said....

can't wait for more to come

~E

Don't kill off Vaughn! It's a good story, but I think Syd should have killed Sark....oh well, whatever. Clue Francie in! Then it'll be perfect! Just don't kill Vaughn!

I really love this fanfic! I know this was a previous chapter, but I got all excited when you talked about Good Charlotte, I LOVE THEM!!!! (Not as much as Vaughn, but they're still awesome!) I'm glad Francie is being exposed to this cause I think she's been out of the loop for long enough.

Your story is really good. Full of action. Keep on adding chapters. MORE VAughn please. and let will live please