Interesting story, needs to be continued though

Its a decent story, but I'm not sure where you're going from here.

In the original Ranma story everyone is locked into a cycle of repeating events. "Honor" or what is taken for honor demands Ranma marry Akane, Ukyo, and Shampoo. But he cannot, he is trapped, so Ranma delays and does not marry anyone.

Your story gets rid of Shampoo and that's good. Ukyo is still around though and that's bad. I have a suggestion. Split the two apart again but get rid of the curse while you do it. Also have Ranma become a girl and Akane a boy. That will get rid of Ukyo, she can't marry a girl Ranma.

Something I have never read before...wow. Lovely story, though it somehow seems uncompleted. Are there any missing chapters? Thank you for writing this fic.

This is a neet little unique idea for a Ranma fic. Would be nice to see more of it.

Not bad, not bad. Very different. Wouldn't mind seeing more at all.

Interesting story. I'm very curious as to what you plan to do with them; cure or something else. Hope to see more.

Thanks!

ya know this could deffinately have a intro of "And now for something completly diffrent" cause damn i have never seen a fusion of ranma/akane i mean damn. and that idiot KoalaKiller need his/her head examened cause damn this is story had a great idea. i mean just look at that idiots works.

You really should continue more of your works. They're good reads.

KoalaKiller...HOW is this plot unorginal?

I've never read anything like it.(And I've read a lot)

And most fanfics focus on Ranma and Akane because the SERIES focuses on Ranma and Akane.

And telling him to stop writing, trhats just being a jerk.

Wow.. Really neat story.. Don't think I've ever read one quite like it.. I enjoyed it loads.

You're a meanie stopping there. I'll be watching to see what twist you come up with. I enjoyed the first part.

I'm beginning to be very fond of your stories, I've read 4 so far and liked them all. This was really original (and this is something I value over everything else). So, ok, perhaps some characters are slightly OOC, but frankly, in this situation,is more than justified. So please, do write some more.
ps I'd suggest Koalakiller to change his/her alias to fanfickiller.

hmm very interesting and original plot, continue!

Yet another Ranma drone

It sometimes amazes me how pathetic many Ranma authors are(these days, they are mostly on FF.net sadly). I use to shake my head in wonder at SM authors who couldn't write stories without falling back on overused plots and pairings.

Anyways, I won't go too much into giving this fanfic a bad rating, but overall I give it two thumbs down for unoriginal plot, not exploring something other then just Ranma and Akane(you think sometimes authors only think those two only exist), a stail storytelling style, slamming characters, extreme OOCness and there is probably other things but I won't bother.

Hopefully you won't write too many more Ranma fics, right now the net is flooded with the same old things, and if you do, try and do something other then what mostly everyone else would do.

Rating: 3.5 / 10

This is a VERY interesting story. I love it, and would most definitely love to see more of it.

The name Ranakane kinda rubs me just a little bit, but aside from that I would definitely love to see more.

While your at it, you might want to read one of my earlier stories, "Cursed Blessing". The idea is similar, but taken in a much different direction.