   Kimzstar 2004-02-22 . chapter 3Hey this is a fantastic story...I hope you plan on finishing the story sometime soon. Carby forver! :C) |
| Jessie51 2003-05-29 . chapter 3 please please please please write more!i love the carbyness its great |
| movielover03 2003-04-04 . chapter 3 keep writing please! |
| ScatteredPolaroids 2002-12-18 . chapter 3 Ahhh! So cute! More please! |
| SuziWan 2002-12-06 . chapter 3 Nice story! I never liked Carby's until they show turned into a Carby! lol Anyway, Please continue, i wanna read more! |
| scangel72 2002-12-05 . chapter 1 This is a really good story and has lots of potential, but the lack of punctuation really makes it a difficult read. If you cleaned that up, it would be awesome! You said you didn't mind constructive criticism! :D |
| serendipity112233 2002-12-02 . chapter 2 ggrr that was cruel!! more more!! |
| lyns 2002-12-01 . chapter 2 this is pretty good so far. if you're still lookign for a beta i'd be happy to help, just let me know. lyns. (lynseythescot@hotmail.com) |
 Pissed Off Poet1 2002-12-01 . chapter 2Please continue this soon! |
| lifesaver55 2002-11-28 . chapter 1 Great job. Nice start. Keep it up |
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