Hahaha... That was hilariously good!

great

Hey i really like your stories i've read tears of flame or the one like that and a royal mix up uncut! i really like ur stoires ur a good writer i was hoping u would work on Tears of Flame because its a god story i think thats wut its called srry i'm 2 lazy 2 go look for myself! but really this was a good story and i like all of them that i've i read hope u can update soon!

O ... DO MORE TO THIS WHEN YOU HAVE A CHANCE I LOVED IT!

-jasmine

I have to admit something. I just realized, when reading your profile, that the reason all the HP fics had unnerving (I'm American) British lingo-they're-dun dun dun...British! They live in England! Anyway, I thought that was kinda funny. Anyway, good luck with your five "A" levels (Whatever they are, I'm a clueless American.), and for the love of Pete, don't stop writing. Sometimes I think I'm crazy...(Sorry if that was random, but write what you know, hey?) (If you haven't gotten it yet, I'm kind of big on parentheseseses...um...yeah...)()()()()()()() Anyhoo, your *ahem* story: It's excellent, like always. (Sorry-here we go with the parentheseses again-about not having a lot of constructive criticism for your story, but Lord knows I'm not in any position to give advice on English. I was supposed to have a plan for my essay done this week.) Anyhoo, keep writing! Launch rockets! Slap your brother for being a pighead! (You might not have one, but I REALLY feel like smackin' my brother one in the kisser right now, ya know what I mean? No? Oh well...)Toodles!
bobalina

this is hilarious. please continue!

ok, if you put this into an actual really long fic or a fluffy one shot i will be down on one leg praising your "holy writing hand" (actually it might be more like "holy *typing* hand" but anyway)

what happend before or afterwards is your choice as to how you portray them just plaese remember that ARABELLA FIGG is a SQUIB not a witch (very importanat fact - also very frustrating).

yeah, anyway please stick out some more lily james fics to make my world turn!

Bon

Ooh yes, today I think I’ll have blonde, leggy with extra cheese and hold it on the brains.”

Hehehe. Very funny, and I liked James' reaction, too.

~TAnia

yeah, i like it!! ;P

hey...i really liked the way that scene was done..witty yet true in a way for james! i have scenes like that pop up in my mind...about diff things of course..hehe...but i can never write them out...its a good begining (sorry for the misspelling) and i dont think u should write anything else before the scene...maybe after that u can write about their relationship developing..altho its done quite a few times, i want to c how diff authors approach it...sorry for boring u with too long a review! xx

u must write more. Plz? I love it just 2 let u know.

hahahahahahahaha, i LOVED it. i also love tears of flame and you shoulkd update that one first but i also think you should develope this into a longer fic... it would be so good! can't wait 'till you update!

haha!! this was short, but it was GREAT!!

HELLO!
hehe...I agree with you...being really really hyper from sugar is so much fun!hehe o well...back to the point...I like this start off. I think u could make this into a reeaalyy good story. im putting this on my favorites list. This James thing is overdone but most ppl make theirs really non-original(a word? is now!)and i get bored and i quit reading but urs is really catchy.:-D but i really like tears of flame and U LEFT ME ON A CLIFFY!! HOW COULD U!! and could u start updating that one and then come back to this one..
THANKS! I KNEW U'D SEE IT MY WAY! :)
*LadyLovely*

good i like the begining well probably cuz thats all that is there right now...if you didnt get that point it means i want u to write more