The story was nice, pretty original too. Parts of it reminded me of a bad horror movie (locked inside a house and separated) but that was fun too.
I thought i should mention- your first and second chapters are posted in the wrong order.
I liked your other Yu-Gi-Oh! stories too. I hope you keep writing

great story. *favs*

This.. is the end?? O.O;; What about the real world? What happens? What about Heinshin? I hope to see a sequel soon. :]

Aw! The reaper's so CUTE! xP

=D AW!! ^__^ I love this! =O but I have to stop here! I have to go to work... ;__; But I will continue on when I return!

an excellent story! very tragic, yes, but it was a story I could really get into where I could let my emotions go, and that is what I like in a story.
This story is going on my 'favourites' list, please keep up your writing, after reading 'Fallen Star', I'm certain you'll do more great fics.
yokudekimashita! (well done!)

... What do you mean "Epilogue"!? That's IT!? What the heck!? GAH!

*feels sappy* Bravo! Liked how you changed tones often!

Is Kaiba the richest man in the world or something? ...Sorry that was just so unbelievable...I really like this though! Um, did you know the first and second chaps are in the wrong order?

And... That's the end...? *a bit disappointed* Aww. You really, REALLY should write a sequel... Just look, I'm not the only one that thinks so...!

whoot!! love this fic!! ^^ and the ending is so sweet. and if Seto-sava keeps denying the fact that he's the reincarnation of Seto, I'll bite him. (I actually will with him. I wouldn't mind. ^^) and he better actually get some sleep. otherwise my poor Seto-sama will get really sick. ;.; but the story's really good. ^^ and I like the plot, though I need MURDER heishin!! >XO

whoot!! I didn't even know you were on ff. I knew you were on aff, but not ff. ^^ though you took my favorite story off aff... T.T (that Seto-sama and Yami one where Seto-sama had a mental breakdown when Mokuba went to America. which you SO need to rewrite!! XOO please...::puppy eyes::)

Oh my gosh, that was so beautiful! .^-^. I'm sorry I haven't written in so long. I took a rather long leave of absence and I rotted slowly away, crying without my yaoi. ;_; And you finished this AGES ago! I'm so sorry!! >< But can you believe it? This was the first story that started my obsession of the wonderful and unfathomably perfect for each other couple Yami and Seto!! ^^ I just wanna thank you for that, because I don't know if I would like it today had it not been for you. You are an awesome writer and I can't wait for the sequel(considering you're doing it!! ^^;)! E-mail me about it please! Thanks for everything!

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Thank you for writing this- I kept cracking up at all the humorous parts! I CANNOT wait for you guys to come out with the sequel. I give this story a 10 out of 10! Please write the sequel soon, so Yami and Seto Kaiba can get together!

The ending DEMANDS a sequel. PLEASE!
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your story started out pretty good...but i think somewhere in between you got lost and started to create too much subplot...and thus the story ended in a disaster...sorry hope you're not mad...but it's the truth. tata!