Oh my GOD. This was exceptional. I loved every second of this story, I would love for you to write more. There was nothing in this that wasn't absolutely brilliant:the description, basing, characters, world building, all were fantastic.

You captured Westley perfectly, the quotes from the actual show rally helped in bringing the character to life. Faith was good, different in all the right ways; I love how she's still as dark as she is in the Cannon, even though she's really the heroine in this.

Doyle is an exceptional character, similar to his angel counterpart but deviating where it makes sense. I hope you write more, you guys HAVE to write more. I know it's status:complete, but this is a truly special piece of work.

10/10

A Very good start to a series. You might try to break up the text into a couple chapters or so. The large amount of reading is a bit intimadating.

I liked it. I wish Glen Quinn hadn't died. Doyle was a great character.

Hey!

love the story and the idea!

This is very interesting. I really like that Doyle's alive...though I can't say I care much for the idea of pairing him with Faith. Still, I can overlook that, just because Faith, Doyle and Wesley are all portrayed very much in character...and did I mention I'm a sucker for Doyle?

very good

I love all your work I'm a total Doyle lover ok!

Definitely going in my favorite author catagory

Oops... forgot to add this story to my faves... :)

This idea is so original! I love it! Nicely done! :)

Well thought out and detailed. And even Doyle's dialogue is on the mark. The personalities are well done. A damn good read

Pretty Neat. Doyle is much better with Faith than Cordelia.

Need more effort

That was great! I really look forward to more!

Wow. I love AU fics, and ESPECIALLY Doyle ones... I think this story really helps the ranks of the few truly good ones. This was just a GREAT story. I like this different Doyle, and it's interesting to see how it could have been if it had been him instead of Angel. I miss the Cordelia influence on him, but the interaction between him and Faith... Wonderfully done! Even Wesley was fun in this fic. There weren't any specific things that majorly stood out as extrordinary, except the whole darned fic. :) Anyway, simply a great story. I'm gonna recommend all my Angel-lovin' friends read this IMMEDIATELY. I can't wait to see more along this storyline... Nothin' like a city of Doyle. I can't describe how much I think of the authors of this right now. Great, simply great.