i like this there is more isnt there!

I liked the two chapters I've read. I hope you reconcile the opposing viewpoints in upcoming chapters.

lol i adore their names! you have to develop this it's so good damnit! sorry but this is never in the show ya know & it should be. i particularly enjoyed the look at trance & the crewmember saying tyr's attitude. 'look @ me & cower!' :o)

weird i could swear i reviewed this! ah well. i love it & i'd tell you to continue but you already have! the last line is also incredibly poignant

Nice, I like the way you've brought the differeing attitudes together like this, makes a lot of good points about how the characters see themselves and how they are seen by others, I really like htis piece, well done.

Short, but good!!!
Keep going!