That story was really nice. All in subtlety.
The writing style fits quite well with Sasuke's POV. I feel kinda bad for him: the realisation of his true feelings was like a slap in the face. Ouch. Green eyes aren't what he wants: blue is far better! (^_~)
Oh, and here is one line that I liked: "It was what Naruto thought and that was enough."

It's NARUTO! THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER! *GLOMPS*
PLEASE MAKE IT SASUNARU!

He's thinking about Naruto, isn't he? x)

Who/What is it?!?!?! :D answer quickly plz

umm is this a sasusaku fic? whether or not it is...i still like it...

^^ Naruto right? Hope so xD

Great It's really Good. and I'm going to take a guess on who it is. Naruto? ( Tell me if I'm wrong lol )

Well anyway it's good.

holyshit!..its naruto!

do not listen to anyone who says that this is bad, this is without doubt one of the best SasuSakuNaru fanfictions i read

I'm sorry for some of the mean reviews that people have left you. You shouldn't listen to them. I swear if people don't like something they have the option of NOT reading it. *sheesh* And who the heck reads about sausage and bacon anyways? :3 And I'm all up for Uchiha GOODNESS (Yeah, right) jumping into a volcano. Hell, I'll even give you a nice push. ^_^

Anywho, enough of my rambling about people who aren't important. I for one, really liked your story. It's the first one I've read of yours and it probably won't be the last. I liked the subtlety of it all and I loved the ending when he figured out what was wrong with that whole day. And I agree with thighs bodacious that if that ever happened in the canon, which I doubt considering Naruto isn't a big romance genre to begin with, that would be the outcome. And you conveyed that idea wonderfully while I was reading and you did it all without even bashing Sakura so any Sakura lovers shouldn't be able to complain about it. I applaud you for that. ^_^

i feel bad about some of the narrow minded retards you've got commenting your stuff -_- this was really cute and i loved the ending. i'm for sasusaku (when it's well written obviously :P) but i totally think this is how it'd happen in canon. her being annoying and all and him wondering WTF am i doing here.

Eww...Naruto?

o who wants green eyes when they could hav blue right? its naruto right? please write a sequel, its so bittersweet!

Oh god, indeed... That was so beautiful. What the hell is wrong with Uchiha Goodness? Stupid **, she/he can't appreciate a good story! Don't listen to him. Or her. The fic is really very original and remarkable. I never review! So that must mean I liked this story so much.

i'm sorry.. you must be sick of all my reviews now... but i like all that you've written, the little twists at the end and all... about her eyes being the wrong colour. whoa. wow. btw... your goldilocks one doesn't load properly.. oh well. happy writing!