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| tenoh27 2004-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is simply brilliant and heart-warming! I have always felt that with time, their love (even with their wrenching parting), will bring them comfort and joy rather than simply angst and sadness. Love changes, progresses or dies; and I would like to think that theirs would mature, even in separation. Thank you so very much for this beautiful story. |
| Mortimor J. Windsor 2003-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseVery well written, great word choice, voice, and all around just greatly written, I would cry, but you know, I'm the lord of all evil. And well, it was great, and I admire the fact that you have little love but much skepticism about humanity, I personally hate it, I despise every aspect of it, it that's not what you meant, pfft. you should, It's so full of vanity, distrust, hatred, and everything that encompasses those things. The evils of man are unrivaled by anything else. It makes me angry. |
| LyraandPan 2002-12-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was very, very good. It almost made me cry. |
| Kuri 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuseOh... what a wonderful little ficlette! :P... i think if youhad written _His Dark Materials_ it'd still be a great trilogy... i love your writing style! well done. :) |
| Amber Romance 2002-12-07 ch 1, | abuse::Sigh:: Beautifully written. I agree with Faded Enigma, lots of writers try to come up with a way to reunite Will and Lyra and murder it. But you succeeded in capturing the feeling of the book, and, to quote an cliche, tugged at my heart the way The Amber Spyglass did. Wonderful job. |
| Zephdae 2002-12-06 ch 1, | abusebeautiful |
| Chupaflor 2002-12-04 ch 1, | abuseA great take on what is possibly my favorite series ever; many stories attempting to continue the saga of Will (and/or Lyra) fail miserably, but this captured Will perfectly. Nice! |
| Ocean Drive 2002-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this. You should do another one, but a 'reply' from Lyra. |
| SkywaterBlue 2002-11-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. It's always good to see literate His Dark Materials fanfic, and there are truely lovely bits in here. I love the description of the paintings, and of Kirjava's fur. Plus, I'm also a big fan of Pullman's philosophy, and its good to see someone else write a fanfic where the goal doesn't seem to be to correct Pullman's 'mistake'. It's a good job. :) |
| tigress247 2002-11-28 ch 1, | abuseooo that was *so* beautiful.. i love it! its perfect.. you're a good writer, keep it up! ^.^ |