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lawchan 2007-01-14 . chapter 2
M jellybeans
lawchan 2007-01-14 . chapter 1
*tear* That was just too cute XD
MyraHellsing 2006-10-02 . chapter 5
squee~ daily dozes of shounen-ai is what i need to keep me alive~ XD you are going to continue this fanfic right? RIGHT?! sory.. i'm normally not like this..(i think...) but i'm so hyper righ tnow (ate apple pie, chocolate/caffeine cake, pocky, etc)
artist-4-rent 2006-05-20 . chapter 5
Aww... That was TOO CUTE!

I forgot to review your other stories, but it would get repetitive to say "THAT WAS AWEZOM3!" for each one. Because it's true.

I am also fond of how you made Squall talk as a kid.

All in all very CUTE! I
Eoko Formerly Known as Hicky 2006-03-21 . chapter 2
Aw, flufy. You're funny, Reaper. Usually I don't like fics at the orphanage where they're older than 5, and I usually don't like little kids being all crushy. -tries to think about elementry school- Okay... so I may have kissed a boy when I was... seven. Dammit. Fine, it's fine, it's cute, I love it. Yay boys, yay. We all good now?
Erica Arllin 2006-02-28 . chapter 5
OMG Don't stop! I must see more!
DigiFox86 2005-12-30 . chapter 5
umm so I take it that Zell was the Uke? Can't wait for more, please continue this story, I'd really like to see how Zell and Seifer brake this 'relationship' to the others.
ynmy 2005-05-07 . chapter 5
cute... ^_^
Kara 2005-04-15 . chapter 1
very cute.
Sora Kohaku 2004-10-06 . chapter 5
Heh heh!*fangy smile* I loved the story.
Extra Large 2004-05-11 . chapter 5
Oh... more fluff! Whee! *flies around as if high on sugar* Wait... I am high on sugar! Whee! *flies around for real...then hits a wall* ^_^;;
Damn! You can't leave your fans hanging like that? They're so cute together! *hugs imaginary Zell and Seifer plushies* Please continue! :)
Extra Large 2004-05-11 . chapter 2
Oh... Flufy? You been drinking coffee again? Lol, just kidding. Love fluffyness!
Fluffy=Good
Heh. Aw! They're so cute! Puppy love! Aw! Nice work with analyzing the jellybeans! Though... I haven't tasted them before... *sob* Poor me! Anyway, love it so far! :)
Susan 2004-04-23 . chapter 5
hahaa. Fujin is great, you picked up the attitude perfectly...
It was overall excellent! You didn't actually 'need' the night (*nudge nudge*) described. It had all that beautiful description and story line around it making it, great. ha. I can't explain it. Brilliant basically! ^-^
Susan x
Zeto 2004-01-11 . chapter 1
That was a great first chapter! how cute and waffy!
Plus, you captured the essence of children perfectly, although I think they seemed or like 7/8 year-olds.
Wonderful job though.
Kursed SeeD 2003-11-01 . chapter 5
Aww! Fluff! YAY!! Write more, please!?
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