good story. good ending.
you may want to make a sequel and elaborate on nick and sara's vacation and their growing relationship. hopefully romantic. I can always hope right?

Hey great story. You should continue it. It is a great story to show the beginning of Nick and Sara's "relationship". There just aren't enough nick/sara stories.

It has a nice start. Finish it up. Add more body to the story and don't be so chopy. Other than that it has potential. I want to know what happens next.

Oh come on it is killing me! Please put the next one up ASAP!!!!!

Yup, I did enjoy it...you write good angst. :) Looking forward to your next installment. Hope you feel better now. :)

Short but sweet!
still.. i would've thought that they would have had a bigger reaction to the pasts... it was to "run of the mill" kinda thing... but don't get me wrong... ur story is still interesting... and I'd like to see what happens when they get to Texas!
update soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

Just discover this story and love it.

Hope to read more soon,

Have a nice day

Franny

Keep the chapters coming!

Good. Keep it going. Love Nick and angst/dramas with him.

No, your story does not suck! It's really good and I can't wait for the next chapter! So keep it up! ^_^

Good Keep going!

Sounds like a great start... i'd like to see where this is going... ^_^

nice start. please go on. I´m looking forward to the next chapters.

you must keep writing. it is not an option for you to do otherwise. i love nicky!!! maybe some n/s for later?...