Very, very nicely done indeed.
This was a great line: "Yes!" Belle cried. "You’ve all heard de stories! Beware of de evil campaign manager! Kissing hands and shakin’ babies! Now run, all of you, before he sets upon you wit’ de promotional pamphlets!"
And you managed to write a likable Bella. Go you.
Remy saying "Oh yeah" was priceless.
Really liked what you built down in New Orleans. Again, very nicely done.

Good series. I liked the bit when Bella Donna was threatening those people with campaign pamphlets. :-)

Ok, just finished reading the whole story arc, and to quote Darth Vader. "Impressive. Most impressive."
thanks for charing them with us.

Now, on to read some of your other stories.

i do like your writing style. this was a very interesting story line. i could c how it could have been a great deal longer. there r many side lines this brings 2 mind and a few things that could have been clairified somewhat but, over all it was very enjoyable. the tale gripped from the start. u couldn't just walk away. z.

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Great story! However there are some things that don't quite make sense 1) Is this a year for Presidential elections? b/c Sen. Kelly was mentioned as being in the race for president, but nothing else was said. Also a lot of elections take place at the same time as presidential elections. 2) How are the X-men just able to sneak into Remy's house? (Not that it wasn't funny, it was.) Also the action scenes nedd some work to make them clearer. Please write more with Gambit!

Wonderful! A lovely series! You have a marvelously devious mind to be able to create such a complicated plot (and to delve into the world of *GASP* politics)! I'd love to see a sequal, though this story does seem to tie up all the lose ends fairly well. And you did a great job writing Gambit (accent & personality). Keep up the great work! Please! Sara V.

very nice!

I know all good things must come to an end, or so the saying goes. But even if you never write anymore on this story, I will think of it as C.S. Lewis ended the Cronicles of Narnia: it is only the begining of the true adventures, in an unending story, where each chapter is more glorious than the last. Too glorious to tell.

And on a personal note, having just run a sucessful campaign for Speaker of the House in my state's Student Congress, this is my favorite line: "Yes!" Belle cried. "You’ve all heard de stories! Beware of de evil campaign manager! Kissing hands and shakin’ babies! Now run, all of you, before he sets upon you wit’ de promotional pamphlets!"

I loved it. I thight the story was very good and it held my interest.

cool ending!!! I LOVE this story!!! WOULD SOMEONE PLEEEEAAASSSEEE WRITE SOMETHING (ROMANTIC) ABOUT NIGHTCRAWLER? I DON'T THINK ANYBODY BUT ME NOTICED IT, BUT HE IS FINE MAN!!!! NOOOO SLASH THOUGH!!! PLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!?????