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turle 9/19/11 . chapter 1
first off ewwww! How old is Misty, and ash and Brock in this fic? Because if they are young she really shouldn't know the things she know. I liked it it was a pleasent read.
JamesLuver 7/13/11 . chapter 1
This was brilliant. I really enjoyed the way you portrayed Misty here, at first being smug over Jessie's loss and then realising that actually Jessie was the true winner of the day. The running metaphor of the jewels was really amazing, and I loved how at first Jessie's tears were "worthless moonstones" but were precious diamonds by the end of the fic. Describing Jessie and James as those jewels was really great. Honestly, I loved this.
Neopuff 12/17/09 . chapter 1
This was the first fic I've ever read from Misty's perspective, and although I agree with another reviewer that she seemed snobby, it's still excellent 3 Having just won such a big competition would easily send anyone's ego high above normal, so it's still definitely in character. I'm glad Misty didn't stay to watch Jessie and James, haha XD
Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus 4/30/09 . chapter 1
Beautifully written! I love creative imagery like the type you used in this fanfic; masterfully using stones to allude to character personalities and relationships. Jessie and James' scene was lovely, and I liked how it helped Misty come to an important decision that helped her mature. Simply beautiful.
anon 9/10/02 . chapter 1
that was sad sniff
Dia 8/4/02 . chapter 1
*sigh* Beautiful.
dk2022 9/29/01 . chapter 1
That was brilliant! I loved the way you wrote all of that story! Keep it up!
Kit-ORain 5/15/01 . chapter 1
That was sooooooo GOOD!
Jadesfire2 4/12/01 . chapter 1
woah that was good. i always thought she didn't deserve those dolls
AnGiE 4/10/01 . chapter 1
umm . . . nice story. (yawwn, i'm so tired! i'm reading ficcies at 2 am!) uhh . . . oh yes! here i am . . . reviewing your fic . . . okay! umm, it had some . . . stuff in it! not that i'm insulting you or anything, but that . . . stuff . . . kinda shocked me, cuz of the pg rating! but write whatever you want to! 'tis your ficcie! this simply kept my low opinion of misty, though . . . she's so meean! oh, and why is misty a voyeur all of a sudden? eww that was gross . . . but it was a nice story, a very good idea, and . . . i'm sorry this review sucks, i'm just so tired. i hope you don't think i disliked your fic. i just hate misty in general . . .
Roquet Megan 1/15/01 . chapter 1
::sniffle:: How sweet! (Jessie should have won, even tho i didn't see the episode.. what time and day and channel (number, if you have direct tv) is pokemon on?
Arrow 1/13/01 . chapter 1
Wow, that was great...I love the Rocketshippers! It was great! Very discriptive...
authormichals 1 12/13/00 . chapter 1
That was awesome! I love your writing tequinece!
Lady Viridis 12/12/00 . chapter 1
Ummm...I'm confused. I think that was something deep and meaningful and it just went over my head.
Fanfic reader 11/28/00 . chapter 1
Very good story. Unlike so many fanfics, the touches of romance in the fic were subtle but very hard hitting. My only complaint is you made Misty at the end seem a bit of a snob. If you were aiming for Misty wanting a pure innocent love, that was fine, but it came off the opposite away. That she was a diamond surrounded by nothing but common dirt seemed seemed to throw Misty's selfview from one extreme (I'm not very good or pretty, etc, etc) to another (I'm sooo special, too special for common people). Not saying you were aiming for that, just that it came off that way. Anyway, overall a VERY good fic.
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