that was sad sniff

*sigh* Beautiful.

That was brilliant! I loved the way you wrote all of that story! Keep it up!

That was sooooooo GOOD!

woah that was good. i always thought she didn't deserve those dolls

umm . . . nice story. (yawwn, i'm so tired! i'm reading ficcies at 2 am!) uhh . . . oh yes! here i am . . . reviewing your fic . . . okay! umm, it had some . . . stuff in it! not that i'm insulting you or anything, but that . . . stuff . . . kinda shocked me, cuz of the pg rating! but write whatever you want to! 'tis your ficcie! this simply kept my low opinion of misty, though . . . she's so meean! oh, and why is misty a voyeur all of a sudden? eww that was gross . . . but it was a nice story, a very good idea, and . . . i'm sorry this review sucks, i'm just so tired. i hope you don't think i disliked your fic. i just hate misty in general . . .

::sniffle:: How sweet! (Jessie should have won, even tho i didn't see the episode.. what time and day and channel (number, if you have direct tv) is pokemon on?

Wow, that was great...I love the Rocketshippers! It was great! Very discriptive.....

That was awesome!! I love your writing tequinece!!

Ummm...I'm confused. I think that was something deep and meaningful and it just went over my head.

Very good story. Unlike so many fanfics, the touches of romance in the fic were subtle but very hard hitting. My only complaint is you made Misty at the end seem a bit of a snob. If you were aiming for Misty wanting a pure innocent love, that was fine, but it came off the opposite away. That she was a diamond surrounded by nothing but common dirt seemed seemed to throw Misty's selfview from one extreme (I'm not very good or pretty, etc, etc) to another (I'm sooo special, too special for common people). Not saying you were aiming for that, just that it came off that way. Anyway, overall a VERY good fic.

Ltttle more than what I wanted to know about Jessie And James...
Alright, and the part whre you said, that Ash and Misty aren't meant for each other..
Grrr, ** me off man!!!!!! ** me off more than Brock hitting on some other girl.
GGGGGGRRRRR...

Danm, that was so cool! i have never read sutch an intristing and original story!

Oh god! That was beautiful! You are one of the most tallented writters I know Mystic! Keep it up! ^_^a

*__* WOW!! What an awesome story!! I KNEW that Jessie was the REAL winner of the Prnicess Doll Festival and your fic captured that perfectly! You are an AWESOME writer, and I can't wait to read more! ^_^