 azab 2009-04-12 . chapter 1i loved it |
 lucio 2006-05-22 . chapter 1Uwah~~This was so cute! i love~~ |
 syntic 2005-06-25 . chapter 1Omigosh! *melts* That was gorgeous! ;_; I swear I felt a rush of true love in this story! Gawds! Great work! I would love to see more in the future! XD |
 Gabriel The Lost One 2005-04-14 . chapter 1hai i think your story rocks plez write more soon |
 913paradox 2004-07-13 . chapter 1*drools at the thought of Isumi* O_O anyway, it was very interesting... i liked it even though i'm not much of a yaoi fangirl... |
 Sapphire Luna 2004-06-14 . chapter 1XD They were playing go,eh?
lol very good. |
 Renn 2004-06-06 . chapter 1this is really really cool!!^^
(the rating I think is a bit high PG or PG-13 should do) |
 Saya 2003-04-30 . chapter 1YAY MY SECOND FAVOURITE COUPLE IN HNG! This fic is just great! I love the way you write. |
 Eowyn 2003-03-26 . chapter 1I wonder why I missed this! And here I thought I read everything in the Hikago section :) This is probably the nicest Waya/Isumi fic I've read up to date and adding the bit about Hikaru was a nice treat for the AkiHika fangirl in me :)
It's really great how you pull it off to stop right before the lemon and still make it very hot :)
How about a AkiHika one next? Please? :) |
 DP-san 2003-01-21 . chapter 1;_^ ;_^ ;_^
'Course they were playing Go. *^_^*
Woooow, your words are pretty simple, but the way it just flows together... It makes it seem as though it's not that simple at all.
*adds to favorites*
~Wusai |
 HaneTaiyoo 2002-12-22 . chapter 1 cute, cute, cute, cute, cute, cute, cute...
I loved it. |
 Lauren-sama 2002-12-09 . chapter 1...This was lovely. Very tasteful, emotional, and sweet- I really enjoyed reading it. Your style of writing strikes me as very delicate and natural... Thank you for posting this here. |
 Moon Klutz 2002-12-06 . chapter 1Aaah, this was wonderful! I love these two characters, and it's so wonderful to see such a sweet story around them! Wonderful, I loved it! |
 Summercloud 2002-11-29 . chapter 1Aw! That was really well done! I love how you show the emotion in such simple things-- like the feel of skin on skin, or the look in someone's eyes. No melodramatic lovesick moaning here! The only shaky part was towards the end, where they have sex. You can't show anything cause of the new rules (I don't think it'd fit with the story to have citrus, anyway), but for some reason the fadeout just doesn't work as well as the rest of the story. Maybe if you stopped it before they take their clothes off? And does it really have to end with sex? Cuddling is nice too...
I wonder why you only take signed reviews? You're a good author-- I think I'll try finding some of your other works now. Thanks for sharing!
-Ami- |
 Sarah22 2002-11-28 . chapter 1AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~~! ::MELTS:: That was just -so- sweet! *_* Wish you had given us more Hikaru/Akira hints, but hey. ^_- Anyway, you have SO much writing talent! *_* You described the romantic scene so tactfully and beautifully... I'm so jealous! o^^o More more! |