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Reviews for: Holding Heaven
azab
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
i loved it
lucio
2006-05-22 . chapter 1
Uwah~~This was so cute! i love~~
syntic
2005-06-25 . chapter 1
Omigosh! *melts* That was gorgeous! ;_; I swear I felt a rush of true love in this story! Gawds! Great work! I would love to see more in the future! XD
Gabriel The Lost One
2005-04-14 . chapter 1
hai i think your story rocks plez write more soon
913paradox
2004-07-13 . chapter 1
*drools at the thought of Isumi* O_O anyway, it was very interesting... i liked it even though i'm not much of a yaoi fangirl...
Sapphire Luna
2004-06-14 . chapter 1
XD They were playing go,eh?
lol very good.
Renn
2004-06-06 . chapter 1
this is really really cool!!^^
(the rating I think is a bit high PG or PG-13 should do)
Saya
2003-04-30 . chapter 1
YAY MY SECOND FAVOURITE COUPLE IN HNG! This fic is just great! I love the way you write.
Eowyn
2003-03-26 . chapter 1
I wonder why I missed this! And here I thought I read everything in the Hikago section :) This is probably the nicest Waya/Isumi fic I've read up to date and adding the bit about Hikaru was a nice treat for the AkiHika fangirl in me :)
It's really great how you pull it off to stop right before the lemon and still make it very hot :)
How about a AkiHika one next? Please? :)
DP-san
2003-01-21 . chapter 1
;_^ ;_^ ;_^

'Course they were playing Go. *^_^*

Woooow, your words are pretty simple, but the way it just flows together... It makes it seem as though it's not that simple at all.

*adds to favorites*

~Wusai
HaneTaiyoo
2002-12-22 . chapter 1
cute, cute, cute, cute, cute, cute, cute...
I loved it.
Lauren-sama
2002-12-09 . chapter 1
...This was lovely. Very tasteful, emotional, and sweet- I really enjoyed reading it. Your style of writing strikes me as very delicate and natural... Thank you for posting this here.
Moon Klutz
2002-12-06 . chapter 1
Aaah, this was wonderful! I love these two characters, and it's so wonderful to see such a sweet story around them! Wonderful, I loved it!
Summercloud
2002-11-29 . chapter 1
Aw! That was really well done! I love how you show the emotion in such simple things-- like the feel of skin on skin, or the look in someone's eyes. No melodramatic lovesick moaning here! The only shaky part was towards the end, where they have sex. You can't show anything cause of the new rules (I don't think it'd fit with the story to have citrus, anyway), but for some reason the fadeout just doesn't work as well as the rest of the story. Maybe if you stopped it before they take their clothes off? And does it really have to end with sex? Cuddling is nice too...

I wonder why you only take signed reviews? You're a good author-- I think I'll try finding some of your other works now. Thanks for sharing!

-Ami-
Sarah22
2002-11-28 . chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~~! ::MELTS:: That was just -so- sweet! *_* Wish you had given us more Hikaru/Akira hints, but hey. ^_- Anyway, you have SO much writing talent! *_* You described the romantic scene so tactfully and beautifully... I'm so jealous! o^^o More more!
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