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elmo-doodle
2008-06-11
ch 15,
abusei cried my whole way through this chapter. MY WORD, you're a brilliant writer! hardly anything makes me cry. well done :D

bloody hell, where are my tissues?!
JamesRKS
2008-04-25
ch 23,
abuseI've finally finished all i can say is amazing. I hope U do a sequel. or at least write another AshxMisty romance. K

your loyal fan,
James
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 22,
abuseI can picture the scene well. Good Job. CHA!
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 21,
abuseWay better than i expected. I love pulling the apocalypse line on my friends. Its both insulting and funny at the same time.
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 19,
abuseI don't know if this is good or bad but, this was a very good example of drunk pre-teens... NOT THAT I WOULD KNOW OR ANYTHING... HehHehHeh
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 18,
abusethat went better than expected.
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 17,
abuseMisty should of slapped the S#@T out of him till he listened. (Ash is an ignorant DUMBA$$)
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 16,
abuseUh oh... FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 14,
abuseWoW... scary... this is a new side of Miss K.
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 13,
abuseWhat do U mean expensive? Ash got Dexter 4 free from Prof. Oak cause Oak said it would help him w/ his research.
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 12,
abuseSo... Is Ash gona run away again?
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 11,
abuseaw. how sweet. CHA!
JamesRKS
2008-04-24
ch 10,
abuseSooner or later he's gona have 2 learn the old but undeniable saying "What do you get your girlfriend?... ANYTHING SHE WANTS!"
JamesRKS
2008-04-23
ch 8,
abuseyay. thats the best "first kiss" writing i've ever read. D@MN Ur good.
JamesRKS
2008-04-23
ch 7,
abuseAh... poor stupid Ash.
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