did you know that this is the first doctor who fanfic ever?

For a fic. made from a dare, it's good.

I'd like to point out just one thing: Turlough is one of the 5th doctor's (so Peter Davison) companions. But the way you wrote this fic. could suggest that the Doctor (now in his 8th regennaration) could have gone and visited his old friend.

Anyway good job.

Seiryuu-san

Interesting. Amusing. I like it, a bit. Although, Turlough seems a bit OOC. It's probably just me-I've only seen the first and last movies in the Black Guardian triolgy. It's hard to get my hands on Doctor Who movies here.
Certainly amusing.

I've read worse.

That was f**king disturbing!

That was cute, but how would Turlough meet the 8th Doctor?

Woohoo! Someone who actually told me the truth. Yes, this fic sucks. My only excuse was that it was a dare and I was pressed for time. Besides, I suck at romance. ;)