Nice! This can't be the end! You'll continue right?!

Ummm .... chapter 10 and 11 are, like ... the same ... thing ... check that out.

AWESOME!!!! That was SOOO cool! A neat idea explaning how 1000 years could have affected the world so much ... your part about light in mintos, rain in Navarre ... interesting. Very nice! iS THIS IT? (I meant to do that ... not really, i`m just too stupid to backspace it ..)

Hey, Cookie Pixie! Sorry I`ve been out of the loop for a while, I have internet issues during Christmas with fmaily and things. Good chapter, the beginning especially, with Carlie killing the Goddess and such was awesome.

I like this story... interesting development! Oh, yeah, just liked to point out that your story's end describes phenomena that occur in my story too. Dunno how that happened... Anyway, greetings from the world's best fighter, Duran the Gladiator (from Forcena ^_-)

Carlie`s good again! Yay! I keep connecting this to the dark Mana Goddess in LoM.It`s an interesting idea. (I don`t see how much longer it can be, though ...)

Another good chapter. I was just wondering how long your story will be. It seems to be drawing a close already .... probably just my imagination ... God job, can`t wait to see more.

It`s really cool seeing Carlie like this ... I like how they aren`t evil, just tormented.

*adds to favorite authors*

You`re good! Very good indeed!

Your style is superb! I can`t wait to see more! Update, update, update!!!!!

*kills everyone for lack of Lise/Hawk fic*

Just you watch ... I`ll get it .... *thinks up brainwashing plans to use on Cookie Pixie*

Good work! You`re a really good writer!!! I`m impressed!

Neat! It soudns a lot like the fic I`m planning after Past Dreams in some ways. I like this dark angle. Real good! I can`t wait to see more!! Update!!!

Hawk/Lise? PLEASE??? It was hinted in Carlie Go Home ....

Awesome! I like Carlie like this! It`s really neat! I like seeing her from different angles! This is one of my favorite stories!! Really good!! I like the dewmon script. Is it real or did you make it up?

I really like your story. Keep writing-or else

um...

i dunno...

Wow. I like it, I really do. It surely is something different. Carlie insane? Freaky, and scary, in some sort of way. I really love it, and I can't wait to see more!

*adds to favorite authors and stories list*

This will be freakin big review, because I have to review all of Carlie Go Home, too. I read the whole thing!!! Great work!! It`s a good story and you`re a great writer. I liked your Hawk/Lise touches, and am holding my breath for a Hawk/Lise fic here, too!! (Ignore Laine, she hates Lise more than any other being to ever exist. I love her anyways!)

Really good work on CGH. I loved your portrayal of her. She was young and childish but the way she weilded the Mana Sword and stuff, it was clear that she had some wisdom, too. And the last battle was awesome. Oh, and the part where Isabella had Hawk. And where Hawk kissed Lise. That was the best part. Yay!

So, this last chapter was super amazing. I can`t wait to see what happens! It`s so interesting! Carlie is taken over by demons, or what .... I`m really curious, great work! Update lots!! I admire your writing of Carlie. She`s dang hard to write, I know.

Really good!

I love Hawkie!

It's great, just excellent. Your way with words - you keep it interesting without leaving out all the details. And don't worry about spelling; I suck at it, too. I'm just hoping this doesn't turn into a Hawkeye/Riese fic... Of course, it's your story, it's your choice. Good work, anyway!

Interesting. Please continue!