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TaleBearer 2008-03-09 ch 1,	abuseThis is so beautiful, even if it is sad. It made me cry. You've really got Saito's viewpoint nailed. This is one of the best Saito stories I've read.
EmptyWord 2007-02-26 ch 2,	abuse"He woke up and understood everything. He realized he’s not perfect, I’m not irrelevant, and the world isn’t under his complete control because his control isn’t complete. Then he walked out like the arrogant coward he is." - It is a little disconcerting how easily Sano reads him. On some other level, Sano's pretty obsessed with Saitou as well. "And when I do find the bastard, he’s going to be the one that walks away changed." - Now THAT is something to be looked forward to. I'm going to have to hunt down that doujinshi somewhere. Thank you for yet another wonderful SaiSa piece.
Ragna01 2007-02-19 ch 2,	abuseI liked it! You going on with it?
Saiko Senshi 2005-08-21 ch 1,	abuseIt was a bit confusing, but in a good way. It made me read it more thouroughly than I would've otherwise. Yes, I am getting a clear image of the scenes. You leave much description of the rooms and spaces blank and that's good because it's nice to fill in the blanks yourself from time to time. I loved how you portrayed Saitou. It was so typical like him, to think that, to overthink things. To analyze and then overanalyze. The ending was very in character too, although I would've loved if Sano woke up and they had a final conversation. Yes I am interested in to where this will go, there for, I will read the next part.
Yukiko-Angel 2004-10-06 ch 2,	abusewow, Sano is not how i thought he would, but not that bad anyway. continue
Yukiko_Angel 2004-08-08 ch 2, anon.	abusenot bad. I had a craving for saitou/sano fics lately (don't know why) and this one is not that bad, but is it finish ? Personally, I like Saitou the way you made him, he look so lost about his actions, and Sano is just as i would thought he would react. Pity ? none of them, they are to much ahou for their sake roll her eyes anyway, go on !
Polka dot 2003-08-04 ch 3, anon.	abuseI think Sano was an idiot, if he's not gay, then it just doesn't make sense to go through with something like that.
kuroiyousei 2003-06-22 ch 3,	abuseYou know, I was thinking about things, and I was beginning to think that I'd never actually given you any feedback on this. I looked around and found that I hadn't, so I came here to reread and review. So here are my official comments: very awesome. Your portrayal of their characters and motives is perfect, and your writing is spectacular. Excellent couple of vignettes, beautiful work.
Desperation 2003-04-04 ch 3,	abuseHey there... now that I've actually seen a few eps of this series, I know who at least one of the characters is! Woo for me! You know, I resent that remark on your intro... I did so edit! Just... there were more reaction comments than actual helpful information, that's all. Besides, it brightened your day, and therefore is more valuable than any grammar/style scrawlings I could have produced! I am most pleased with my wit... tee hee... I'm too lazy to actually review this story, since I already did (in person, might I add). But I will repeat that I think your wording can be absolutely fabulous! (Oh, that's something YOU say all the time... damn, I think I'm around you too much if things are doing to start to rub off...) Anyway, I think I'll be going now. If I don't finish coloring lor's chibi, she'll kill me. I've had the damn thing since... before march break. OOps...
Li 2003-03-30 ch 3, anon.	abuseHi MsJadey! I read these fics on SxSAS ml... but I never gave my comments.. so here they are! ^_^ I totally sympathize with Saitou more... and I wish that Sano would grow to have more affection towards Saitou... Reading Sano's POV changed my view of the story a bit... because I had believed that Sano wanted Saitou... not to test him, but to have him. Sano's POV changes my whole perception.. but it's still a GREAT story. =) please don't end it here.. I think this fic can go on, until they meet each other again..
Minna 2003-03-25 ch 3,	abuse>_> I read them in the wrong order; 'Hold On' onlist, and 'Close Your Eyes' after -and then realised I'd read it before and felt less than intelligent. :) I can't really find myself sympathising more or less with either character -humm. In different ways. Sanosuke was very in character. ^^ At least, I found him to be. o0; //hold me tightly and run his fingers through my hair// That's a really sweet moment, and I love it. Understated, as well, which is definately a good thing. ^^* I'm listening to a sappy song, don't mind me. I really like the job you did of Sanosuke (does that sound dirty? o0;;) too often people try to duplicate his mechanisms, and come across as blustering or irritated, instead of...oh, Sanosuke. I'm not real good at feedback, anyway. :) Yay for you! makes plebeish fangirly noises
amanda 2003-03-24 ch 3, anon.	abusekick **! i love sanos pov!! i can really see him acting like that. damn, i love that anger and sense of revege that he has!! it serves saitou right, he cant ran away from every mistake. but, i do feel sorry for saitou too. he did seem like he regretted treating sano as he did. however, im more of a sano fan so im siding with him. both stories were wonderfull written, not one was OOC!! i cant wait till you start the series!! itll be interesting when sano finds saitou!when do you think you'll have it up as well as your other stories? i hope its soon!!
FarStrider 2003-03-24 ch 3,	abuseWhat only 5 questions? You must be tired! I was expecting something like this; I think this would be Sano's reactions and even his motive (even if I don't necessarily agree with him). I happen to really love the way you have made their interpretations of events different. Personally, I sympathize more with Saitou, here; but, I'll reserve judgement until I read the rest of the story HINT HINT . . . FarStrider Queen of Semicolons; Empress of Ellipses. . .
amanda 2003-01-27 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was so good!!! the ending was sad though. will there be a sequel? perhaps from sano's pov? i really enjoyed reading the story. good job
Li 2002-11-29 ch 1, anon.	abuse=) Hey Ms Jadey... I already reviewed at the SxSAS but.. I just wanted to tell you again.. that I think this story is really good. =) I really don't find it OOC at all... and I'm glad to see when Saitou can drop his mask once in a while. You seriously should write a sequel in Sanosuke's point of view... =) or maybe you can write a happy ending.. sigh we can't leave this two boys lonely for life.. they need to be together.. =)

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