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| bn jk 2007-04-06 ch 12, anon. | abusejj |
| animecihck 2005-07-14 ch 12, anon. | abuseupdate this story soon also please e-mail me when you update |
| Bunny Aino 2005-04-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseI need to call your attention to something: You have just used an overused plot known as betrayal. This plagiarism which is against policy and is grounds for story removal. I won't report you, but as a fellow authoress, I'm giving you a warning. Sincerely, Bunny Aino |
| Kallista Starshooter 2004-12-01 ch 12, | abuseMEAN!! update soon! JA |
| Leo Girl 45 2004-07-23 ch 12, anon. | abuseI loved it I am so glad u didn't discontinue speaking of that y don't u make a new chapter plz continue u have not put a chapter up for a long time if u don't*pulls out one of Chichi's magic frying pan* I will hitt u tell u do o and about the "key" thing it is spelled ki or Chi :-) |
| Silver Moonlight-81 2003-12-04 ch 12, | abuseHi i read your fic and i like it a lot but where are the outers senshis? they're with Serena ot against her to?, please continue i'll be waiting for the next chapters, bye. |
| Vitaestpulchra 2003-11-16 ch 4, | abuseMy God, learn how to spell! No, learn how to write, period! Do you have any clue what you're writing!? I'm 11 and I write better stories than you ever will! OMG! Fine, fine, nice plot and everything, but seriously. You need better grammar, and you should put in paragraphs, sentences that make sense, etc. And their talking is horribly unreal. |
| almasy919 2003-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg omg omg your story sucks. |
| schmezfez 2003-03-22 ch 12, | abuseVery good. I want to know what is going to happen so please put chapter 13 soon! please? |
| SaffireSoul2 2003-03-22 ch 12, | abuseA betrayal fic combined into a Vegeta/Serena fic. Damn, and I though 17 and 18 was a terrible deul. But nope, this tops it. Don't you realize Vegeta would never go for a brainless weakling such as Serena, and what's this? Pluto accidentally dropped her in a different dimension? Was that the best you could do? Take my advice, go get some talent and imagination before you continue this poor fic. Til then, SaffireSoul2 |
| Eo*Angel 2003-03-18 ch 12, | abuseHm...i like it very interesting update soon> Eo |
| Kaggie-Chan 2003-03-17 ch 12, | abusehay it's amanda or kassy i'm sorry i haven't reveiwed the other chaps. i couldn't just so you know i love your story it's cool can i borrow your Magic Knight Raybeth book sometime? |
| Sporanox 2003-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOne thing first, how can it get annoying to you that I 'review myself'? Since you don't give a crap about my story, and since you are not me, why would you care if I review my own story? Eh? Hahaha, control freak. Of course, if you prefer it that way, then I'll review YOUR crappy story. 'hi sproanox me again and im glad you think so kindly of me, and just for your imformation im not an idoit, dispite what you think.' Your misspellings and lack of capitalization ruin any sarcasm that might have been in that. And before you make assumptions about yourself, remember these two sayings: "Character is in the eyes of the beholder" What that means is you cannot praise yourself. Other people's opinions of you are the only ones that count. Unfortunately, in the eyes of the beholder (me) you are an idiot. So, idiot, nothing you say will change your status. "Action is louder than words" In layman's terms, your misspellings and lack of capitalization speak louder in determining your character than what you actually said. It's part of the reason why you are an idiot. 'how can you be ruthless when almost no one is standing behind you.' *blinks* Who's standing behind you? A horde of morons such as yourself? One man with pure logic can overcome millions of morons who have flimsy arguments and points. It would be good for you to remember that in the future. Another thing I gleaned from this is that you are a coward. A coward will only act brave when he/she has his/her entourage of buddies to back him/her up. But when he/she is alone, he/she runs with her tail between her legs from any opposition. Since you will not argue if you don't have the backing, you are a coward. 'at least we have people behind us. you think your so tough and witty , but your really not.' How do you ascertain this? Ok, kid, I've proved in my preceding arguments that you are an idiot and a coward. You are also a moonie. Now, compare an idiot, cowardish moonie with a total lack of wit, spelling, grammar, etc., to one of the two supreme flamers of the section that (*gasp*) ACTUALLY bothers to SPELL, and has WIT! Now compare this supreme flamer to the moonie. Who is tougher? Who is wittier? I challenge you to answer that straight. '. i mean we just come here do to what we love to do, write and then you look down on us because were younger or not as smart as you, well im sorry but thats not the way it works.-ryu' You write crap. I'm trying to improve the crap you write. Unfortunately, since the dawn of their existance moonies have 'politely' refused the suggestions of constructive criticism and turned a deaf ear towards arguments. The flamer's job is to pound said arguments into their heads until they get it. Sorry, but moonies such as you leave me no choice. All in all, I can't believe that you are this dumb. You think that being younger justifies your crappy writing and complete lack of spelling and grammar. At least you could try to spell, or put paragraphs in your crappy, crappy reviews and flames! Heck, by now you should have learned to spell LONG ago! What's the matter? Too lazy to check your words? Yeah, I thought so. This makes you a lazy, cowardish, idiotic, witless moonie. -Sporanox P.S: Spell my name right! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! S-P-O-R-A-N-O-X! |
| foxy-bitch2182 2003-02-20 ch 11, anon. | abuseUh! Meannie! How dare you leave me with such a bad cliffy! Cruel author, cruel! lol. Well that is my account name up there i am just to lazy to sign in. lol. well the story is really good and can u e-mail me when the next chapter is out? Please? Keep in touch! Ja ne! |
| foxy-bitch2182 2003-02-20 ch 11, anon. | abuseUh! Meannie! How dare you leave me with such a bad cliffy! Cruel author, cruel! lol. Well that is my account name up there i am just to lazy to sign in. lol. well the story is really good and can u e-mail me when the next chapter is out? Please? Keep in touch! Ja ne! |