Hey! This was good! I really liked it! For the epilogue, you could make Casey kidnap Clara, but then that would make for a long thing...anyway I really liked it.
-Andrea

First off, I'm really enjoying the story so far. I always love a good H/M romance story. Just one thing though that I have found somewhat distracting- the misspelling of the word diaper. Babies wear DIAPERS not DIPPERS. It's not a major thing, but like I said, it did tend to distract me from the story. Well, I'm off the finish reading the rest of the story now.

YES YES YES! Make an Epilogue! You could have a M*A*S*H Reunion at their house. Because they haven't talked to anyone lately, no one knows how many kids they have. Then Bj and Peg can move to Crabapple cove, and Margaret and Hawk can have some "fun" and someone can either hear them or catch them.

you need to contuinue this story

*sniff* I'm sad to see this end, But I'm glad it ended like this. :D Go Clara,the little speech-giver!

AW. I love it. I see why this could be the end though. I guess you maybe could have the family go on a trip or something, if you want it to continue.

YAY! Happy ending, hurrah!

Yay for Mylissa! Good on you! Hope to read more sometime soon!

Update, I love it. it has a great plot.

This is a good story r u gonna write more? If u r than HURRY UP PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

Good story. I like that it's a twist on the typical H/M stories. I've read a couple of your others, like those too. Keep writing!

WOWEE, I love it!! Man, Claralynn is sooo cute!!

Finally they got together yay!!!

WOOOO! YAY!
It's okies,i really do like this chapter much. :D
Gotta love the H/m goodness.

I keep reading this over and over again.
I just love your writing so much assilem.And like many others do,you don't have the two engaged within 5 seconds of when Margaret arrives. :)