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Fick Chick
2009-11-12 . chapter 58
This is an interesting story. I wish you would start writing it again.
mrespman
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Ok. It's says on the description of the story that it's not abandoned. However, the fact that it hasn't been touched IN ALMOST THREE YEARS points otherwise. Please. Either just abandon it, or update it. Preferably the latter, as this is one of my favorite stories, but please just make up your mind. Thanks.

-mrespman
Vicky Trudell
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! You said not abandoned, so i read and now i think im going to die if it isnt updated soon. One of my fav stories. PLEASSE

UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
sp
2009-09-01 . chapter 58
ok now I am at chapter 58. Please submit another chapter soon.
AutumnHeart
2009-09-01 . chapter 58
Hey there - I wandered past and saw your profile update from earlier this year, and just wanted to say I'm glad you're going to continue writing at some point. I've enjoyed this story several times now, and will be glad to read more whenever it should appear.

All the best in the rest of your life,
-A.
sp
2009-08-30 . chapter 10
3 years is not to long to wait for a update. Hope your llfe and time return to writing.
AramilOniasha
2009-08-26 . chapter 58
This is a good story, you should continue it
gcsm
2009-08-25 . chapter 58
i hope what ever is in your life right now goes away. very good story, i will be waiting for the update :)
purrfus
2009-08-18 . chapter 26
I read stories with super powered Harry, Snape, Ron, etc. This is the only story I've seen with both Harry and Snape super-powered and some many others with extra gifts as well.

The original characters are showing nicely also.
purrfus
2009-08-18 . chapter 5
Dumbledore 'wondering if he had been to indulgent'. The chapter is well put together and other than that bit is entertaining.
purrfus
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
In a reality where more than just the order knows Black is innocent. Hm. I look forward to the explanation of why no trial no investigation. And hope that you ignore JKR and keep him in this version of reality.
peruvianprincess
2009-08-14 . chapter 58
This is the second time I've read this story, so it must be worth reading. I love the HP/NT ship so I'd love for that to continue as long as possible. You've really made it believable. What a great imagination you have! You've incorporated a lot of new magic and also things we use everyday but wouldn't normally associate with the HP universe. Congratulations and I hope this will be finished some day. Wishing you better health.
AramilOniasha
2009-08-13 . chapter 12
This is an interesting story

I would like to poit out that a high level druid, can turn into a dragon.
Eternally Inquisitive
2009-08-09 . chapter 58
OMFG! best HP HHR era story EVER! Update please!
moonsword27
2009-08-03 . chapter 58
Alright, I actually read your profile, so I'm not going to ask if you gave this story up, but I WILL say, I'm glad you haven't. I would favorite this, but as it's my policy to try to leave either finished or never will be updated in that section...it's just going to stay as alert for now. Not that that particularly matters to you.

Anyway, I have enjoyed ever bit of this fic, and I'm sincerely glad you have at least written and shared this much. I'll agree with your comments that H/G doesn't make much sense...at least not unless someone were to go back and add unseen interactions between the two, which frankly don't occur here. Besides, I like your prophecies, and well...just about everything. You've been extremely ingenious in this story, and the only possible flaw that bugged me early on (Harry's easy trust with Snape and Draco, come on, right?) you explained in later chapters completely satisfactorily with the Soul Reader.

Also, kudos on the intriguing backstory for dementors. Very clever indeed. And, well...honestly there's alot to compliment you on, and I don't believe I could cover it comprehensively enough, although I will share the hope that Draco or at least Severus spend more time in their magical creature form. Or at least Severus...increasing power could provide for another form, right? *lookshopeful* Okay, probably not, but the Draco-as-a-unicorn and Severus-as-a-phoenix entranced me.

Moving on, I truly hope that real life calms down enough for you to continue this story soon. Other than that, good luck to your daughter on her manuscript!
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