Ooh...umm... o_O Okaay...
Poor Ran...Muraki scares me...not really, but I do think he's creepy...
The story is well-written, it's just...um, I'm not quite sure how to describe it...hmm, I guess I just feel sorry for Ran, but it's a good story anyway.

That....was...strange....but I love it!! ^__^ Muraki is so~ pretty!! It was so very yummy!!! Love it!! Write more!!

Whoo!!! I do LOVE a good crucifixion... especially one that ends like this. *grin*

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
sequel! sequel! sequel!sequel!

That was fantastic hon! And I *loved* the imagery. More! I'd love to see you write more unusual pairings, if this ficcie is anything to by lol.

Have I mentioned how much I like you're Aya? Lovin' it!