Hello!

I liked this for the most part-- Erik's line about darkness and a divine light is very true. ^^ Opposites attract...XD

There are a couple spelling mistakes here (breathe instead of breath), but nothing to worry about. To make the setting a little clearer, maybe add some brief description of the balcony?

Overall, this was sweet. XD I so love EC cuteness.
~Trypt

ah how sweet. didnt really understand cos im an idiot but still sweet.

Loved it

TS

Aw...*sniffsniff* *hugs Erik plush doll* *its eyes pop out*

AW! Granted, it was weird... But in a deep, abstract way. I like it. :) And the ending was just to die for! Especially after reading all your other little pieces!
You know what you should totally do… Make them all into one long story… well, obviously, it won’t be long… but tie them together… or, even, don’t! Just have it be a collection of vignettes, but make them be connected! Because they are!
Just start it with Duplicity, then you could add in one for the whole DJT and final lair experience, then have To Let You Go, then Normal Light, and then, instead of having this one (A Single Step) be at the engagement party, make it at the wedding reception… Cause following Normal Light, Single Step is SO effective… actually, I just read Normal Light like 5 minutes ago, then I read this… and it made SO much sense… especially with this ending!! AAh… it would be perfect!! You should do it!! All you need is a final showdown vignette where she leaves him to marry Raoul (though promises she’ll come back a la Kay so Let You Go works… and as I said in my review for Let You Go, you left it open ended, so Single Step could ABSOLUTELY finish them all off!)
Do it do it do it do it! It would be a work of art! And highly original too… a full-length POTO phic told in vignette style… mixing the poetry and prose… it would be awesome! You must! The DJT/final lair part could be totally abstract like the others… could even just be their final goodbye/Erik’s sacrifice and that would imply everything in between Duplicity and the end…
Do it do it do it!
You don’t have to worry about losing reviews… you can always copy and paste them over yourself… or ask us to do it for you! I’m sure none of us would mind, since we all loved these so much!
If you are going to do it, do drop me a line and let me know ;) IM me anytime!
~
Lisa (CHRlSTINEDAAE)

Beautiful!

This was very sweet! ^^ I liked it but it was a little on the short side for my liking. I like LONG drawn out fluff! hehe, but that's just me.

Not bad, C-chan, not bad at all. Hee hee. Actually, I loved it. I was a little confused, but given that it's like 1am right now... I think it's a little understandable.

You really need to write that one fic that you told me about before, with the Kahnum. I wanna see it!! *cries* *composes herself* ahem...

I need sleep

*Yawn*

*Head plops onto the keyboard* *Snores*

-Red-chan

Awww, what a lovely little piece. Poor Erik. How brave of him to venture to the party, and how wonderful that Christine was happy to see him. It kind of reminded me of a family reunion or something. lol, anyway, excellent job! :)

Lovely! =)

Loved it.

yeah, tis really cute, but still: it's a bit mean on Raoul's part and a little OOC for Christine, even tho she only has one line, lol. But the rest of the poem was beautiful! Let's have some more! :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

It was cute, if you wanted to write another few chapters it would be a great start. All you would have to do is think of a good plot. But anyways, I liked it...much cute sappyness.

cool i hope there is a second chapter

Goos style, but not much of a plot.