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amani 2004-10-31 . chapter 1
i loved the fic good job *two thumbs up*
smallville fan 2004-01-14 . chapter 1
I loved it. Please continue it. There is so much room for more chapters. The potential is great.
beaker164 2003-10-14 . chapter 1
Pretty well done. A little heavy-handed regarding Clark's future as SM, but very enjoyable.
Steph 2003-09-25 . chapter 1
Hey, loved the story.
Hidden Willow 2003-05-09 . chapter 1
I found it hard to believe that Pete would tell Lana without Clark's permission and that Clark would let the others find out.

But I thought the speech Lana gave to Clark on why his arrival was a miracle was really well written. It wasn't overly mushy, needlessly wordy, or cliche. It beautifully and simply showed how Lana feels for Clark. I could very much see Lana saying this to Clark on tv.
StarCannon 2003-02-07 . chapter 1
I LUVED IT! I LUV CLANA! WRITE MORE! I NEED MORE! :o)
ssj-shark 2003-01-21 . chapter 1
I LOVED THIS STORY! It tottaly rocked! There is a definite lack of Clana stories, and you are one of the few writers who write them. I think thats great! I loved your portrayal of Lana, the whole X-Ray vision argument was priceless. Great Job. and join Sweet, like Lance said!
horseplay 2002-12-08 . chapter 1
the basic idea was pretty good about ur story, but i have a hard time seeing Pete betray Clark's trust like that, and Clark not being mad! That's ridiculous, it would never happen. I also don't think Clark would feel good about advertising his secret because he hurt her feelings. All in all, it was pretty good, really sweet.
SilverStarSheep 2002-11-30 . chapter 1
The only two things that sucked about this story:

1. I really wanted to see Chloe's reaction.

-and-

2. It was Clana!

I was really hoping it would end with Chlark. But other than that it rocked. Dude, you ROCK!!!
Meredith Welling 2002-11-30 . chapter 1
Freaking awesome!
Smalltowngirl89 2002-11-29 . chapter 1
OMG!!! I wanted to see Chloe's reaction!! Oh well, it was an awesome story. :)
j32 2002-11-29 . chapter 1
This was a great fic!I hope that you write more Smallville.Spelling and gramer looked great.And the characters were writting well.I can only sujest working on discption,but very good fic.
Lance Robert Weeler 2002-11-29 . chapter 1
That was great! I look forward to any stories you write in the future.

If you are a hardcore C/Ler, this might be the place for you:

http://lanaclark.suddenlaunch2.com/index.cgi
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