 amani 2004-10-31 . chapter 1 i loved the fic good job *two thumbs up* |
 smallville fan 2004-01-14 . chapter 1 I loved it. Please continue it. There is so much room for more chapters. The potential is great. |
 beaker164 2003-10-14 . chapter 1Pretty well done. A little heavy-handed regarding Clark's future as SM, but very enjoyable. |
 Steph 2003-09-25 . chapter 1 Hey, loved the story. |
 Hidden Willow 2003-05-09 . chapter 1I found it hard to believe that Pete would tell Lana without Clark's permission and that Clark would let the others find out.
But I thought the speech Lana gave to Clark on why his arrival was a miracle was really well written. It wasn't overly mushy, needlessly wordy, or cliche. It beautifully and simply showed how Lana feels for Clark. I could very much see Lana saying this to Clark on tv. |
 StarCannon 2003-02-07 . chapter 1I LUVED IT! I LUV CLANA! WRITE MORE! I NEED MORE! :o) |
 ssj-shark 2003-01-21 . chapter 1I LOVED THIS STORY! It tottaly rocked! There is a definite lack of Clana stories, and you are one of the few writers who write them. I think thats great! I loved your portrayal of Lana, the whole X-Ray vision argument was priceless. Great Job. and join Sweet, like Lance said! |
 horseplay 2002-12-08 . chapter 1the basic idea was pretty good about ur story, but i have a hard time seeing Pete betray Clark's trust like that, and Clark not being mad! That's ridiculous, it would never happen. I also don't think Clark would feel good about advertising his secret because he hurt her feelings. All in all, it was pretty good, really sweet. |
 SilverStarSheep 2002-11-30 . chapter 1The only two things that sucked about this story:
1. I really wanted to see Chloe's reaction.
-and-
2. It was Clana!
I was really hoping it would end with Chlark. But other than that it rocked. Dude, you ROCK!!! |
 Meredith Welling 2002-11-30 . chapter 1Freaking awesome! |
 Smalltowngirl89 2002-11-29 . chapter 1OMG!!! I wanted to see Chloe's reaction!! Oh well, it was an awesome story. :) |
 j32 2002-11-29 . chapter 1This was a great fic!I hope that you write more Smallville.Spelling and gramer looked great.And the characters were writting well.I can only sujest working on discption,but very good fic. |
 Lance Robert Weeler 2002-11-29 . chapter 1That was great! I look forward to any stories you write in the future.
If you are a hardcore C/Ler, this might be the place for you:
http://lanaclark.suddenlaunch2.com/index.cgi |