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| Shalimar23 2007-04-20 ch 8,  | abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE IT! i hope u r able to update soon! |
| daianapotter 2006-07-22 ch 8, | abusemore plz^^ |
| xXDJXx 2005-12-01 ch 8, | abuseIts is a very good story, can't wait to see what happens next. :D |
| Megan Consoer 2005-11-14 ch 7, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| ForbidenMaggiks 2005-11-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseYou're just like me when it comes to up-dating all your stories (I've got alot too). Anyway I like your story I think its really cute and I can't wait to read what happens when everyone meets. |
| Megan Consoer 2005-08-30 ch 8, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? |
| ladytokyo 2005-04-13 ch 8, | abuseabout damn time that you updata. you know some of us have been waiting for your updata. I like the story plz updata I have to know what goin to happen next. plz updata soon ladytokyo |
| lili125 2005-04-06 ch 8, anon. | abusePLeases keep wirting i like. But, needs more action. |
| AnnitaChibaKou 2005-04-02 ch 8, | abusehello thanks for send us another chapter, i really really like your story, it has the typeof action i like and romance, that thief-police action never gets old so keep it going :) |
| Megan Consoer 2005-04-01 ch 8, anon. | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? |
| rvrphoenix 2005-03-31 ch 8, | abusei don't know what to think its been so long since you updated i forgot about the story but i went back and reread and i like but who the hell is octavious hondros? and how did you some to rest on that name? |
| ladytokyo 2004-09-29 ch 7, | abuseOMG! what going to happen? who knows? PLZ you have to UPDATA! you can't just leave your fans hanging here. UPDATA OR I WILL SEND A MOB TO YOUR HOUSE. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA! sorry I got carried away there. just updata k. |
| SmFan 2004-08-24 ch 7, anon. | abuseYour story is great, but I've seen the exact storyline by two other authors. Thiefs and FBI, heists, there are some detail differences but other than that, your storyline is completely the same. And these two authors have been around quite awhile. I'm not saying your copying them, because their story is posted on another site not fanfiction.net, atleast not yet. You just might want to speak with them and get some type of verification for your story so no one else mistakes your story to a more worse extent than I did. I just don't want someone to report you. Contact Starry Eyez07 or Sailor Star6. I think those are the two authors. Look them up on ff.net. You won't find the story, but I think you'll find them. Just wishing your story the best. :) No ill feelings, just trying to help. Ja! |
| Lady of Enchantment 2004-08-24 ch 7, | abuseIt's a nice, but short, chapter. I guess if u update often, i won't mind! ^.^ luck! |
| Sheba The Devil Whore 2004-08-22 ch 6, | abusew00t! Nice work, its a very interesting story. |