|Reviews for No Room Left to Pretend|
| Melowies 11/8/12 . chapter 1
Listen...I read every word, did not skip one sentence. That means it was to me, mesmerizing. I have no degree of bad for you in this story except that it was over too soon and I wanted to read more. I feel for Chris and want him to quit feeling sorry for himself and go on. I feel he doesn't know yet that what is done is done and wallowing in his own self pity will not bring his friend back. He seems to be punishing himself. Magnifying the bad that happened and none accepting of the good he did. It somehow reminds me of Audie Murphy who even though he was a very decorated hero was still unable to let the awful past go and live in the present.
| Guest 7/31/10 . chapter 1
| Vampire Queen 12/16/07 . chapter 1
This was really good. I'd beg you to update, but since it's been years since you posted this, I don't think you will. But it was fantasticly written. I hope you don't give up writting.
| ACCOUNT HAS BEEN TERMINATED 11/18/07 . chapter 1
I know this story is from a long time ago, but it's really good! I'm new to the fan fiction site, and Behind Enemy Lines is my favorite movie. This was a very solid start!
| PeggsterLover 1/15/07 . chapter 1
This is really good! Keep up the good work and update asap! :-)
| Brontesgirl 9/11/06 . chapter 1
Awesome, please don't stop. I want to read more!
| Darlian 6/12/06 . chapter 1
They had asked for a moment of silence for Jeremy Stackhouse, the pilot murdered right in front of Chris’ own eyes.
Chris finished polishing his shoes and changed the CD.
He switched it to Beethoven’s "The Storm."
Wow, that was powerful. I love the way you fill out the characters. You have a way of writing that conveys the tumutulous emotions of the characters. Don't stop now. )
| KiraKit0388 12/2/04 . chapter 1
Nice job. Grammars good and the flow is nice. I hope you do another chapter because its very good.
| schuyler-fox-dracul 9/27/04 . chapter 1
This was the FIRST ever BEHIND ENEMY LINES fan/fic i had ever read and it was very good, i enjoyed it...must write somemore!...good job :D
| Flying Purple Pig 9/4/04 . chapter 1
Well. You haven't updated. I'm rather disappointed. Are you having writers block? Or are you simply tired of this story? It's quite good. All of you're stuff is. Everything runs together smoothly and the characterization is really good. The original character seems to be pretty realistic as well. So...you've got a great start...and I'm waiting for an update! I don't think I'm the only one again great story and I would LOVE to see it updated. *wide, hopeful eyes*
| zeeharan 8/5/04 . chapter 1
What is with all the stopping! The story is terrific and you just had to stop. Tease.
Please find time to update soon. So few people write in this fandom and this is wonderful. Please, please keep on going!
| anon3908 5/30/04 . chapter 1
OMG! This was brilliant! Wonderful! Perfect! I'm running out of good words! PLEASE update! I loved this, you have the emotions and personalities down perfectly! THIS WAS GREAT, please, please update!
| Feuille 5/19/04 . chapter 1
Please, more! I love it! Lynn Stackhouse's nastiness was very unexpected - I was expecting them to be very understanding, helpful, sympathetic, and him feeling even worse because of that...but I like yours better!
| Unity Kincaid 4/23/04 . chapter 1
Hey! Update, already! This is a damn good story!
| Surfer-Rosa 2/10/04 . chapter 1
Hey. Just found your fic completely by random and completely loved it. You really got the character of Burnett - I can really see Owen Wilson saying those lines so I'm really impressed. Is there gonna be more? Please say yes!