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| Vampire Queen 2007-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really good. I'd beg you to update, but since it's been years since you posted this, I don't think you will. But it was fantasticly written. I hope you don't give up writting. |
| PsychFan81692 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI know this story is from a long time ago, but it's really good! I'm new to the fan fiction site, and Behind Enemy Lines is my favorite movie. This was a very solid start! |
| TARDIS-2008 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! Keep up the good work and update asap! :-) |
| Brontesgirl 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, please don't stop. I want to read more! |
| Darlian 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThey had asked for a moment of silence for Jeremy Stackhouse, the pilot murdered right in front of Chris’ own eyes. Chris finished polishing his shoes and changed the CD. He switched it to Beethoven’s "The Storm." Wow, that was powerful. I love the way you fill out the characters. You have a way of writing that conveys the tumutulous emotions of the characters. Don't stop now. =) |
| KiraKit0388 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job. Grammars good and the flow is nice. I hope you do another chapter because its very good. |
| schuyler-fox-dracul 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was the FIRST ever BEHIND ENEMY LINES fan/fic i had ever read and it was very good, i enjoyed it...must write somemore!...good job :D |
| Flying Purple Pig () 2004-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell. You haven't updated. I'm rather disappointed. Are you having writers block? Or are you simply tired of this story? It's quite good. All of you're stuff is. Everything runs together smoothly and the characterization is really good. The original character seems to be pretty realistic as well. So...you've got a great start...and I'm waiting for an update! I don't think I'm the only one either.Once again great story and I would LOVE to see it updated. *wide, hopeful eyes* --FPP |
| zeeharan 2004-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat is with all the stopping! The story is terrific and you just had to stop. Tease. Please find time to update soon. So few people write in this fandom and this is wonderful. Please, please keep on going! |
| Donelle 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! This was brilliant! Wonderful!! Perfect! I'm running out of good words! PLEASE update! I loved this, you have the emotions and personalities down perfectly! THIS WAS GREAT, please, please update! --FPP |
| Feuille 2004-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease, more! I love it! Lynn Stackhouse's nastiness was very unexpected - I was expecting them to be very understanding, helpful, sympathetic, and him feeling even worse because of that...but I like yours better! |
| Unity Kincaid 2004-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! Update, already! This is a damn good story! |
| Surfer-Rosa 2004-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHey. Just found your fic completely by random and completely loved it. You really got the character of Burnett - I can really see Owen Wilson saying those lines so I'm really impressed. Is there gonna be more? Please say yes! |
| DarkDragon7118261 2003-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseCan't wait for more... |
| Chensuu 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story...I keep waiting for an update. You have a very interesting take on the character, very believable and angsty. Please continue it soon! |