SAD!!! SAD!!!

*sniff* Poor Jonathan. He's been one of my favorite minor characters for a long time, and I'll miss him. It's nice to see a story devoted to him, as sad as it was. I think you captured his disbelief and fear nicely.

Wow, this was great. You know, I'd gotten so attached to those kids. I was upset when they became "evil". But I figured, hey, we only lost Warren and I won't get TOO upset about that because, hell, he DID kill Tara as soon as she became a really cool character....but NO, why did Joss hafta bring them back to kill Jonathan? It's not fair, and it's probably the most upsetting and stupid death on the show so far. Sure Jenny, Joyce, Tara...all sad, all emotional, but there were valid storytelling reasoning behind them. Okay, okay, I'm gonna stop ranting, and just say, I love your stuff, and I don't generally like fanfic. :)

Ha ha, stupid Jonothan. You had to know that was coming ^_^

Aww, the Death Star reference. I loved that. I wanted that on MY van, even if it was the 2nd Death Star from Return of the Jedi ^_^

loved it
haha
hahaha
stupid Jonothan
now the slurpees belong to me
Your friendly neighbourhood Fuzzy Elf

I'm really glad you wrote this. I was shocked and horrified when Jonathan died, and he should be remembered, I'll sure miss him. The poor guy.
:(

Awww...I hate that Joss killed off Jonathan. I was so excited that he was back, and then he gets killed. It's horrible enough that Joss tried to make him bad. He was such a nice guy. The way he died really, really sucked. I loved this story.