She's getting a lot of guys' numbers ain't she?

i'm reveiwing for once! SEQUAL! please?

i'm reveiwing for once! SEQUAL! please?

Hee, hee! Logan cross! Hee, hee, hee!
OOPPPPPS! He's gonna kill when they get out of that battle. (sorry, can't think of anything to say as am suffering from madness and it's perminent!)

Hehe... aww, don't be lonely... looking good so far! :p

*Kitty*

Hey, this is a cool story so far! *goes off to read Ch. 2* ^_^ Lol.. the nicknames are really original and cute! :P

*Kitty*

Yeesh! Alright already! Your muses are starting to scare me... BTW, this is the first time I've seen your fic, so that means this is the first time I've read it, so I couldn't have reviewed, so don't blame me.
Oh, yeah, I liked your story. Fast paced, with some humor added in. Just an opinion, though, everything seems to just come together almost too easily for Rac. Perhaps throw in something random that screws up one of the minor plans.
Eh, oh well...Keep writing.

He-he! More fighting!
I like being bloodthirsty and reading that!

Heh! I smell trouble! LOL! love this fic!

but the fantastic four, and spiderman are not mutants. The foursome were geneticly altered just like the bug guy. You said that Apoc wants all mutants, and would give them all headaches, and as said before the foursome arent' mutants and thereby would not be harmed.

Your girl is way to powerful, aka Mary Sue, plus the abovious religious connotations in the title is what scares away the people and the reviewers

not to mention when you go on a spree of writing, aka dialogue, you forget to mention who is talking. We don't know who it is, soo please for further chapters please add who said what, doesn't have to be all the time, but at least when a new person does join in.

other then that i liked the whole prophesy, save you might want to go into more deatails of it, as in tell us what it is, before you start hinting at it, it would help us follow along and kind figure out whats going on easier

thanks for listening to my critgues, and please don't hate me for speaking my piece. GOOD LUCK with the rest

Interesting... I like Apocalypses...I like this, one question though, what are the three H's?

hah ha!
Alex collapsed!!!!
i really have to sort out my hatred with those with a last name of 'Summers' or 'Grey'.
keep up the good work

just seen this fic now. Its great, why arent people reviewing?!!!!
well...i like it
*mutters to self*

I was kind of confused with the nicknames, for a moment I thought they were new characters *rubs the back of her head* Oh well, is good so far!