great fanfic,but...it's a little ...peculiar, if u know what i mean.

great story.loveit

This is such a good fic!! Well written and just such an attractive read. I've never imagined Dorothy's past to be so tragic but the way it's written really added a special touch of Dorothy's sarcasm and slyness. Is there more?? Please be more!!!!

good it made u wonder y she had 2 go thru all t@ pain

This was beautiful. The writting was fluid and quite poetic with repetition. Please continue this! I'm really curious as to who this girl is!!

This was such an excellent read. I am kind of at a loss for words right now. It was very good how you wrote the main character. She seemed to do nothing but observing without making any judgements on the people who harmed her. It's so clear that when only one person would listen to her, would help her she would grow out to be such a person, but she has no-one.

very well written. i would love to see where this story goes. keep up the good work.

~Rokjai