 slyfull 2005-01-02 . chapter 6its a very funny story, please write more! btw, just how long are you going to drag out the answer to autumn being put in slytherin?! hurry up and tel us! |
 The Carpet Shampoo 2003-08-03 . chapter 6All right, here's a once in a lifetime oppertunity...that's right, I'm sharing with you a Pixie Original Idea. Because, as I was reading Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix for about the 7th time through, I suddenly had an inspiration I had to pass on to you.
Observe:
Annoying Little Kid: *waves arms all around a person, not touching them* I'm not touching you, I'm not touching you!
Harry Potter Version:
Annoying Kid...with wand!: *waves wand around* I'm not jinxing you, I'm not jinxing you!
Well, I think you should use it in your fic...^^;
BTW, nice chapter. Bit on the short side though.
-Pixie |
 cowgirl1 2003-06-28 . chapter 6I really like this story
And Malfoy is a jerk. Poor Harry, having to talk to her all over :(
*pats harry on the back*
and kanojo, I thought I knew you, but you never even told me about the first child.
And Sean never told me about it either :( I will have to e-mail him about this, call me |
 Abyss de Lioncourt 2003-04-12 . chapter 1Wew! 80's music nerds we are! You sound like Godzilla...har har! Well, that was very...interesting...yesh it was! Stupid frog...KILL GOTEN! Whats "ermione" mean? "REVIEW CHEESEY PEOPLE! ermione" What does it mean? We'll never know...write more! Need fic...
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 Captain Oblivious 2003-04-11 . chapter 6*snicker* Almighty Frying Pan of Doom. . . I like that. I myself had a frying pan. . . but I smacked my foot with it and it has been my enemy ever since.
I love the way you write. . . things like "Round the school he went". I should put ketchup on one of my friend's faces while they're sleeping. . . you're giving me ideas!
How can you shorten the name 'Autumn'? Cuz you can call Erin 'Rin' and Harry 'Hair', but what do you call Autumn? Aut? Umn? That just doesn't make sense. . . .
Well, I'm off to further explore the land of fan fiction, preferably things with Malfoy *hugs her Malfoy*, Sirius *hands Sirius a can of cheesewiz. . . however you spell that*, Remus *ties a bow around his neck and puts a tag that says 'fluffy' on it*, or James and Lily *pinches their cheeks cuz they're just too cute!*.
Update soon! *waves spastically and accidentally smacks Oliver in the face* OOpsie. . . I didn't mean it, honest!! AH! *Runs away, screaming. . . mysteriously whacks head on sunset* |
 Your a stupid ass 2003-04-10 . chapter 1 Jesus christ, woman. This story is horrible!! A FRYING PAN?! COME ON! That would KNOCK HIM OUT FOR HOURS YOU DULL HEADED RETARD.
and its totally OCC. |
 Abyss de Lioncourt 2003-02-13 . chapter 5-does the Happy Elf Dance!- WEW! That was funny! You should put me and "Elvis Boy"(just dont call him Elvis Boy) in the story! FUN FUN! I would be in Slytherin and be my evil gothic self! MWAHAHAHA! -throws stuff at the little screaming kids- DIE CHILDREN!DIE! Well, Autumn seems to be having fun! STUPID HARRY! JUST STICKS THE CD IN HIS ROBES! HE COULD SCRATCH IT, YA KNOW! What if its Good Charlotte or Box Car Racer!? -hugglz Benji plush- MINE! He looked so hot live when I went to the Deck The Hall Ball(Sparta, Good Charlotte, Sum 41, 3 Doors Down and Disturbed)! -plays with Dave Draimans (frontman of Disturbed) chin peircings- Add him in the story too -continues- GOOD STORY NEED MORE OR ELSE I WILL SUE YOU AND RUN OVER ALL THE OLLIE FROGS!
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 The Carpet Shampoo 2003-02-06 . chapter 5Just a quick note, but as a Harry potter super-obsessed fan, you better make those magical headphones. Normal electronic stuff doesn't work at Hogwarts. It was in Book 4, when Harry, Ron and Hermione were talking about how Rita Skeeter was spying on people. Honestly SV, haven't you ever read Hogwarts, a History? (lol, j/k!) All right...I'll tell you what. I'll stop exposing plot lines if you give me Oliver Wood. if not, I have a very good idea of what I think happens in the next chapter...
~Pixie |
 Foxy A 2003-02-01 . chapter 5Soooo, the music made her evil o.O |
 cowgirl1 2003-01-27 . chapter 5I liked it, but I want you to write another one. This one wasn't as interesting as the others but still very good.
Oh and remember that music she was listening to HAD TO BE Skater Boy |
 cowgirl1 2003-01-25 . chapter 4I am not a minion so I will review only as a fellow writer. That was funny, Malfroy is a pig. It was a bit crude but Malfroy is a pig. You portray the charcters so well! |
 cowgirl1 2003-01-25 . chapter 3I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! |
 cowgirl1 2003-01-25 . chapter 2I loved it it was great, and if you don't keep this series going and going I will hit you over the head with a frieing pan. Oh yes, I don't read harry potter and was wondering if you could, maybe put little explanations for the harrish things in your stories at the begining so I know what they mean. But that is my falt and you don't have to. Love the storie. Keep writing.
---eyes glued to screen--- |
 cowgirl1 2003-01-25 . chapter 1Ok so you and the funky dude or Atumn and Harry and his potter (inside joke). I would have to say I really don't know. How about you and funky dude. . . I mean Oliver: that makes me think of olives, yummmmmm. That was a great chapter it was really good. I mean think that was REALLY good. Well gotta go. Bye
---grabs madnetic pole from you--- |
 hookt-on-fonix 2003-01-23 . chapter 4 Whoohooo! Write more o.o!!!!! |