plz continue

ALthough I'm confused by who died, I did like the fic! I'm on my way to read the next part!

you just have to write more!

Great Poetry Fic. Goddess Bless and Follow the Path,
Ellie,
"I am out of options...I hope you meant what you said...I did."~Aeryn Sun, DMD~

Kim-I..er..kinda changed the plot halfway through writing it...and...er..kinda forgot about that part...and...er...I kinda sortish fixed it in the next part that I should be working on............Gomen!!

Needs an explination. Why is John alive if her love is dead? One less eprson is going to read part 2, beacause I really don't want to know.

where's the rest of it?

Hi! This is Ellie, the author. I am working on the second part, I am having a bit of trouble, but I have about a page or so. I have unfortunately been sucked into Gundam Wing fic, and started 2 fics. ::sigh:: Believe me, I really want to finish this one! I am really proud of it. As for it being a comedy fic, umm, the word no doesn't even begin to decribe it. This is basically death/insanity fic. Don't read if you want to be in a good mood. Thanks for reviewing!

Good story.......but please write the other parts soon, so that we can find out who died (if anyone did. Or am I just reading the fic wrong?!?!). Excellent work.
Zig.

good

Doorway, you mock me.
Your welcoming doors do not welcome me.
My love, my life, my mate is in there.
Let me in you vindictive beasts.

... Is this supposed to be a comedy fic?