It is so nice.I loved it.write more yaten-Hotaru:)I am new here.

its pretty cool i guess but could you make the next chapter a little less straight forward it is really touching...may i suggest reading the kingdom hearts story where i belong

o do another one ^_^ *dances in the rain* * all the sudden gets sad* i wish i had a boyfriend to snuggles and dance in the rain with *Sighs* o well ^_^ i hope you write another Yaten/Hotaru fanfic soon later

Aw! It's so cute and fluffy! I love it!

Yaten is my favorite starlight, and Hotaru is one of my favorite scouts!

It's fun to dance in the rain!

the one of the best stories i ever read. i know its sounds prepy but i can't ahndle it... Its so cute!

I have but one word to bother you with and then I'll be gone:


KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwwww!! so Kawaii!!! i love it!
-Seish

Awwww....that is so kawaii^_^ Now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside^_^ You're an awesome writer!
~*Erica-chan*~

I love it! I want to dance in the rain too! ^^ ::looks up at the clear blue sky and pouts:: O well! Write more Y/H fics!! Ja ne!

~Natsumi ^.~v

AWW! That was so kawaii!! Yaten and Hotaru make a GREAT couple!

AWW! That was so kawaii!! Yaten and Hotaru make a GREAT couple!

AWW! That was so kawaii!! Yaten and Hotaru make a GREAT couple!

AWW! That was so kawaii!! Yaten and Hotaru make a GREAT couple!

I loved it. It was a wonderful story. I like dancing in the rain even if people think I'm a little crazy for it.

This is great! And refreshingly unique! I've never seen this pairing before, yet somehow it just seems to...fit. Also, nice job keeping Yaten and Hotaru in character too! Ja ne!