Desteny Wolf 2007-01-22 . chapter 1I keep read ur fics over and over again... cant u just pliz update, for a crazy fan. pliz |
paige 2004-03-31 . chapter 2 Woow cool. Some of the parts remind me of te amber novuls. Whell the partes in this chapter. by |
Rachel9466 2004-01-03 . chapter 4Yay, it's back! Ideas ... can't come up with any right now ... but maybe I'll think of something later. |
leatharegee 2003-12-03 . chapter 4KEP GOING! |
Jinako-chan 2003-08-02 . chapter 4 Considering the last chapter was close to a year or so ago, you did a real good job with it. And are you planning a new fic? Cool! (Though I'd love it if you continued that Drode fic...) Either way, this chapter wasn't so bad. I liked Tim's treephobia, and now we're starting to see the Croake seriously f*cking up the Changrians' world, which is nice, plot wise. And Ali's missing? Holy crap! Heh, I like that Steve got shot down, though. He was being kind of annoying in this chapter.
M, Stephen King...I mean, back to the review. =P
As for ideas about the plot, why not have the Overlord's plans backfire on her? And, of course, the Animorphs should find Ali. Then maybe Georgia could hitch a ride outta there, hook up with the Yeerks, and add more ye olde trouble. Or do something about those "superpowers" the Ellimist was mentioning?
Either way, I'd like to see what you come up with next, whether you continue this or not. (It'd be great if you continued it, thought!) |
mannytea 2002-12-27 . chapter 3cool, it's back up, the stories good, and I'm definatley gunna kep coming back yo check up on the story |
Super Hurricane 2002-12-13 . chapter 3Oh goody, since I'm back up, I can review. One, I'm not going to smart-mouth again. Two, I know of better things besides Prune. For example; "Melon-head","Cannonball butt", "Jurassic Mix-up", "Nutjob" and "The Thing That Lived in the Trash Compacter". Also, thanks for adding the shiver effect, it really does happen. Now to kick some ugly mules! |
Elcolo9 2002-12-01 . chapter 1Non-interactive, you say? How cunning of you. |
Alikat 2002-11-30 . chapter 3 Wow! A new chaper! How amazingly amazing!! *Does a very Kermit-like 'YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!'* Coolness! |
Rachel9466 (2 lazy 2 sign in) 2002-11-30 . chapter 3 Yes! This story's back!
Okay, no leaving ideas.
Constructive ... well ... you don't capitalize the word Yeerk. Or is that intentional?
That's the only thing I can think of. The rest of the story is good ... and I am not giving any ideas whatsoever. |
Jinako-chan 2002-11-30 . chapter 3 Woohoo, it's back! **does the happy gerbil dance**
Okay, you said be constructive in our reviews, so...um...UM...**long pause** I think I found a spelling mistake somewhere. That's kinda, well, all. I really did try.
I like Tim! Tim is funny, and Sonya certainly seems interesting. Okay, I have a soft spot for disabled characters. What's wrong with that? Just one question, who are these aliens that Tim and Sonya kept talking about, huh? They've gotta be the other overlord's aliens but who are they? Hey, and our powers are starting to show up! Woohoo!
Doesn't look like the Animorphs are going to blend in quite so easy. I hope that doesn't cause problems. Ha, I loved the part with the Overlord of Everything watching the Ring. That was great! I would just like to say that I fully support giving Drode deviant thoughts. =P
Ellimist and Crayak as bodyguards. Don't ask me why but that really cracks me up.
Now, we can't just -put- something in our reviews that would just -happen- to inspire you, could we? Nah, I'm just kidding...uh, and I know people in their twenties and up that write fanfics. If you like it, why should you stop?
'Kay, I think I'm done rambling now. Good Day. |
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