Wow I read this on Icy brain I did not know it was on this site cool. Yay this and you go on favarites

good fic seperating into chapters wouldn't be a bad thing though

You know this was really interesting and I loved it. ,...,

OMG! That was so COOL! I really mean it. You gotta tell me your secret! Please.

Sinister SIS away!

o... wow... very well written... and everyone was in character... _ yay...

but I didn't see terribly much point in Yuffie being there... I mean, I guess it started with her... but all she did was to be a comic relief... I dunno. Companion, I guess... Perhaps you should write a sequel where Yuffie finds what SHE is looking for... perhaps...

really really really good writting!

Well, there were a few typos. At least three, though I didn't count. There's something to improve; less typos!

Aside from that, it was great.

Could have used some poetry, though, but I won't blame you for a lack of it. It was great!

I just LOVE this fanfic. Its amazin how you put Vincent and Yuffie completely in character. And I'm so glad you didnt pair them off! KEEP IT UP!

I originally read this on RPGamer and loved it. I read it here, and I still love it!

...I'm not really sure if this is supposed to be a Vincent/Yuffie pairing or not. (I'm not too fond of that pairing...)

I think you did an excellent job with this. The characters were IN-character and it flowed nicely. Plus it was nice and long without seeming to drag on and on and on and...

Hmm...Well, keep up the good work!

- Jade A.

this was a good Yuffetine. Also this one was speacial. There wasn't any hiddden feelings from Yuffie or VIncent.

I freakin' *heart* this story. It was so much fun to read. And that you would say it's not that great. I'm so...jealous! I wish I wrote half as well. Can't wait to read the second installment. .

Good story, just ya should have broken it down in two parts, my scroll box shrinked down to nearly nothing..lol

Finally had the time to read the fic, and I love it :) Now for the other ones.. Well, christmas break is coming up.. :)

I love it! basically, well, their's a nice 'freindship' going along with Yuffie and Vincent, and no hint of any thing romantic. Which is difficult to write.

Great fic, just tie the climax together a little more neatly. In my fics, I always feel I have to explain everything to my readers so they understand what's going on. I can't really surprise people like that, but at least they know where I'm coming from.

Ok, what I'm trying to say is there's some questions to be answered. Why was Seph a Esper? What the heck is Vincent's flashback about killing him about? Why is Vince suddenly overcome with angst about Lucrecia at the climax? He didn't even mope once about her! And what's with the duality/identity crisis about Vince and Chaos that comes out of nowhere? It needs to be built up!

Can you see where I'm coming from?

You're good, but hey, we always can get better.

Thank me by finding my pasttime ff8 fics and reviewing them.

Uhm.. I didn't have time to finish all of this, but I saved it to my HD. The part I did read (first 6 pages) seemed great though, and I'm sure the rest will be as good. :) (oh, if you disapprove of me having your fic on my computer, mail me and I'll delete it..)