What happened? Such an intersting story and you stopped? Is it posted somewhere else? "Steam" was also an intense story that stopped at a most inoportune spot. Are you planning on finishing? I hope so. If they are posted somewhere else, can you e-mail me? Good luck. Hope you are still writing!

I LOVED IT ALL, UPDATE VERY,VERY,VERY SOON!:)

Woa, what's happening? Enishi is going to try and kill Kenshin in front of people? How can the whole of Japan be in one place? Will he die? Gah! Overload!

On the sidenote, great job at spinning your tale. As captivating as all the rest of your fics though angst fics are starting to give me a depression attack. Nevermind! I'll just have to read some of your other stories to get over it! Muhahahaha. Update! And try to edit if you have time!

here is an idea how about UPDATING! i am sorry but i have been waiting on this story forever!!

Man I Loved Gladiator... So This Is So Perfect. Can't Wait For More. I think it is kinda funny because they are not apart of the Romeman Empire. So It Like Dosen't Fit But Its So Good.

Oh Man Write More... Pleae Please Please.

Oh! I want to find out what happens! You can't end it like Gladiator =( Poor Kenshin. Poor Maximus. Update soon.

now,at last I already read your Fanfic!!!!! yehey!!!!!! I think.....hmm... I don't figure what will happen next it is like...ah!!!! please write the next chappie because I can't say anything about it okay!!!!
gomen nasai!!!!!!!

I read this chappie a week ago but I forgot to review it. Things seem to be gettin geven more interesting. I feel so bad for K and K though. They must be like on eof the most tortured couples in anime. Ple-lease update soon!!!! I don't know how much longer I can what for another chapter to be posted.

miles of smiles,
Naomi

Wow...Battousai VS Enishi?

I never actually saw the Jinchuu Arc, but I'm guessing it contained some awesome fight scenes to have inspired so many fic based on it. I kinda feel like I missed out. **shrugs** Oh well---I'll just have to wait, ne?

Anyway, I liked this part, too, but I must say I liked the first chappie better. **shrugs** I don't know why, but I just do.

I'm looking forward to Chapter 3. Keep 'em comin'!

Chiruken

Whoa. This is intresting stuff. Looking forward to seeing how it ends up.

Fantastic!
I love this fan fiction!
Very angsty chapter indeed but very well written!
I can't wait to read chapter 3!
Please update soon!
*smiles*
thank you!
keep up the good work!
best wishes!
sincerely,
star-chan

This story seems so sad so far. I love angsty fics though so I don't mind. Is this sort of going to be your own version of the Jinchuu arc? I was just wondeing. Baka me for asking a stupid question. Anyway, I sure hope things turn out okay for K and K since they seem to be the couple that is tested and...err...totured (that's not the right word) the most. The girl at the end you were talking about was Misao, right?. Just wondering. Please update soon and if you can please visit me website at http://www.angelfire.com/emo/rkfanfics and sign my guestbook. Thank you!

miles of smiles,
Naomi

Well the over all plot is good! The only thing that is wrong is the way you write your diolouge! Its not suppose to be all bunched in with the paragraph but other than that i love it! Do update again soon!

Nice start!
I like that ficcy and I hope you'll continue!
Oh, I suspect what Enishi planned, but I hope I'm wrong and Kaoru and (especially) Kenshin will survive!
Please let it be happy ending! It depresses me when there is no hope in the end! sniff*
Please update soon! I promise to leave a review!
Hugs and greetings, Joey

What's with all the funky paragraphs?

Good writing, although hard to read because of crazy formating.