*gigglesnort* That line with the jackals was great. I love your Jonathan! And the dialogue was witty and brilliant... You never cease to amaze me.

Kenzay

Oh. My. God. That was... bloody brilliant!
I loved this: "Maybe he accidentally insulted a girl jackal, and he's trying to apologize. Only she won't accept his apology. He probably feels bad about what he said, and wishes he could take it back."
And the last two lines.
Good show!

The absolutely best parts:
"Evie...?"
"Yes?"
"Heh. Gotcha."
"Good night, Mister O'Connell."
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"Nah. We won't even see it. Your brother's snoring'll scare it off if it gets curious."
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"Maybe he accidentally insulted a girl jackal, and he's trying to apologize. Only she won't accept his apology. He probably feels bad about what he said, and wishes he could take it back."
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sweet sweet sweet.
good piece of work.liked it very much.
thanx.

*grin*

Loved the format and the over all adorability of it.

"I mean it. Ordinarily I'd say carry on, full speed ahead, but she is my baby sister. A chap's got obligations, and all that."

LMAO!! my fave line!

Absolutely charming, as usual. And spot on characterization! Immensely enjoyable ;)

very good. like all your conversations stories.

Cute! And if that seems short to you, it's because I've run out of things to say. Writing reviews seems to drain my creative abilities...

Very charming and very amusing, and I'm delighted to be mentioned. Honestly, I could hear them speaking every word, you've got their voices down perfectly. -Ell

*grins* Simply perfect. As always. Particularly loved 'I wouldn't kiss your brother if I was dying of the plague and he was the cure.'

Hehehe.

Hehehe. I like that last bit. Hehehe. :)

Hee hee! Love it.... I'm actually beginning to like Evelyn as a character. She's not as conventional a heroine as I thought...

*laughs uncontrollably*

Hee hee:) Very cute. Particularly Jonathan... "I'm all for defending your honour, but he's rather a large man..." and "Ordinarily I'd say carry on, full speed ahead, but she is my baby sister. A chap's got obligations, and all that." Funny:):):)

Much as I miss the darling asides that sprinkle the rest of your stories, your dialogue has always been so witty, so accurate and so damn entertaining as to make me completely forget everything else. Very cute, very brilliant bit of fluffiness. It's made my day ;) Thank you!

Jester: X.x

Jangler (my muse like thing that's in my head and in a story I wrote): **pokes Jester** er, I think you killed her....

Rick (another voice in my head that comes from "The Mummy"): Er, is it possible for Eve to have killed Jes, Jangler?

Jangler: It's quite obvious what happened.

Rick: It is?

Jangler: **nods** yep. She died of laughter.

Rick: **stares really hard at Jesters smiling dead face** I think you're right.

Jangler: What are we going to do?

Rick: Tell Eve to bring her back to life, I guess.

Jangler: no, I don't think That'll work. I think we should just perform CPR.

Rick: Okay.

That was way funny and awesome! I think it'd be cool if you did a sequel. Y'know like conversations in a Dirigible. lol that'd be cool!